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Love Making

LOVE MAKING

love making
     with outer clothes
  he rubs
my shoulders    tease
   his lips brush my neck
the boat tips
     the waves
undulate
   his scent
wrecks my dock
      kinetic 
  electricity
floods all my circuits
   off
slides the lingerie

8/2/2019


Yalto Verse invented by Edward Ibeh

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/15/2019 3:08:00 PM

Why am I discovering this now? Excellent yalto, Kim!:-) Bravo!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2019 7:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Edward! Thank you for Yalto!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/4/2019 6:22:00 PM

Beautifully but not easily done, my friend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/4/2019 9:34:00 PM

Thank you, Caren!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/2/2019 2:52:00 PM

A steamy tale tastefully written, Looks a tricky form to write but you did it well Kim. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2019 6:44:00 PM

Thank you, Tom! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/2/2019 10:49:00 AM

I wonder... how many love making like that would one survive dearest, Kim! haha! Breathtaking!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2019 11:30:00 AM

LOL! :) Kim

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/2/2019 10:32:00 AM

I enjoyed the flow and tease of your poem, Kim--looks so hard to write this form--you executed brilliantly.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2019 10:36:00 AM

I say just begin. Thanks so much, Vijay! Hugs...Kim

Quoth Theraven

Date: 8/2/2019 10:14:00 AM

Kim, I love "Love Making". Such a sensuous trip of the bond two people share makes me want to enlist new haberdashery. -Richard

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2019 10:17:00 AM

For my honeymoon, my best friend bought a silk gown. I had to join my husband flying from coast to coast. He gulped when he saw me wearing this. My friend was a gem. Have a happy Friday, Richard! ....Kim

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/2/2019 10:10:00 AM

That made me smile...A lovely weekend to you Kim...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2019 10:11:00 AM

Excellent! To you too, Arturo!