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Love Lost and Found

We were once a pair of flying, floating, diving doves Warming on wintry days under weathered wooden eaves We swayed and swirled with ecstatic, electric pleasure. In synchronized steps to the rising and lilting measure, We meandered down meadows, gathering magnolia flowers We roamed and rambled, resting under roomy bowers We watched life’s swirling and twirling ebb and flow We waited eager to grab life’s evanescent, ethereal glow We never knew arrows sting or sorrow’s depth Each merry morn, for us, was love’s lovely rebirth We walked close to paths celestial and supernal And lived and dallied in thoughts of love eternal But how soon I lost the rhyme n’ rhythm of life Dropped into a weary world with worries rife Became a bent, broken reed far beyond repair With no songs sung to be tuned or played ever I had no clue why you had so hastily and stealthily left me I found myself drifting and drowning in a dreary sea I have been under despondent delusion and deep despair Thought that our love was cracked and wrecked beyond all repair Until you let me know what had transpired behind the scene And told, you still love me and look longingly to make me your queen To make everything a sweet surprise for me and for everyone, You went to a far forlorn land for a living, but had none On false charges, got detained and delayed in a refugee camp Where you had access to none, was taunted and treated like a tramp Now that you have a decent job and can stand on your feet You would come to take me as your wife and would soon retreat Now I count my days and weave dreams on dreams Of the time you will come to darn the torn and tattered seams When you proudly proclaim once more in my attentive ear You are my devout darling, my all time legitimate lover Each wayside flower brings to me your long lost, lovelorn face The wind swayed lilacs and lilies reflect your gorgeous grace On sordid silent nights, as the odor of your body and hair Comes winging and wafting, for a while, I feel you are near
March.19.2022 ~ Placed First~ My Lost and Found Love Poetry Contest Sponsor- JCB Brul Resubmitted for Alliteration- Old or New Poetry Contest Sponsor- Joseph May

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Date: 4/22/2022 9:15:00 PM
A very poignant and heart-rending story. Beautifully written with apt alliteration. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/20/2022 1:47:00 AM
Wow, I am entranced and cannot wait for a sequel, oh I want to see the happy ever after. This is so full of emotion, love, yearning and hope! What an amazing masterpiece Valsa! <3 ~BJ
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Valsa George
Date: 3/20/2022 2:38:00 AM
You are very generous, BJ. However you have made my day ! Thank you so much for your uplifting comment ! First I wrote a rhyming poem without seeing that it should be alliterative. To make it eligible for the contest I tried to make it alliterative and I fear I spoiled its original charm. Stay blessed dear !
Date: 3/19/2022 7:17:00 PM
This is heartfelt and heartbeakingly real. "When nothing was heard from you for long, for so long Dismal and deadly fears nagged and plagued me in throng A boundless barrenness often bombarded my bleak space The question –‘What next’ blared into my ears and stared at my face"
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Valsa George
Date: 3/20/2022 2:34:00 AM
Thank you dear Caren for your kind visit and comment !
Date: 3/19/2022 11:04:00 AM
Sounds like you are ready to write for Bollywood! Aloha!
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Date: 3/20/2022 2:33:00 AM
So you know how a Bollywood movie is like ! Perhaps I may write one in future ! :) Thanks a lot Rico !
Date: 3/19/2022 11:01:00 AM
"Each wayside flower brings to me your long lost, lovelorn face The wind swayed lilacs and lilies reflect your gorgeous grace On sordid silent nights, as the odor of your body and hair Comes winging and wafting, for a while, I feel you are near" Such perfectly beautiful poetry. Life is not always obstruction free, and sometimes our motives not clear to others -- even ourselves. Happy endings are my favorite. Classic, meaningful poetry.
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Date: 3/20/2022 2:30:00 AM
When we read something with a happy ending we too feel happy ! Thanks a lot Joe for your beautiful evaluation of life and my poem. Blessings !
Date: 3/19/2022 8:51:00 AM
Valsa, this is a really emotional poem, with loss and grief cumulating to a happy ending.  Have a wonderful weekend and best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/20/2022 2:28:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your good wishes and words of appreciation dear Lasaad ! Have a great weekend !
Date: 3/19/2022 8:41:00 AM
All’s well that ends well, enjoyed … very well written, Valsa, as always, good luck in the contest
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Date: 3/20/2022 2:26:00 AM
Quite true ! Very nice of you to have read and commented ! Thanks a lot Seeker friend.....
Date: 3/19/2022 8:05:00 AM
Quite an emotional write Valsa,, sadness then a happy ending. Have a great weekend and good luck. Tom
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Date: 3/20/2022 2:25:00 AM
Yes, life is full of ups and downs....! This is a slice of life ! Thank you so much Tom ! Wish you too a happy weekend !
Date: 3/19/2022 6:18:00 AM
A great poem full of emotions. Well done and best for a win.
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Date: 3/20/2022 2:23:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear poet friend Victor !
Date: 3/19/2022 5:49:00 AM
Togetherness, sadness, longing are all felt when reading your poem! Bless you, Valsa!
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Date: 3/20/2022 2:23:00 AM
Yes there is togetherness, sadness and longing ! Thank you Kim....
Date: 3/19/2022 5:26:00 AM
Much love and longing in this heartfelt story, Valsa. A wonderful journey leading to a happy ending.
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Date: 3/20/2022 2:22:00 AM
Thanks a lot Vijay ! So happy to your words of sincere appreciation ! Have a great weekend !
Date: 3/19/2022 4:28:00 AM
I love the happy ending for you Valsa. You expressed the joy and sorrow with equal passion. This is a great entry my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/19/2022 5:13:00 AM
Thanks a lot Connie for your encouraging response to my poem. Your sweet words are much appreciated ! Stay happy and cheerful... Have a great weekend !

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