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Love Lost

I saw you but not as I remember Your brown eyes no longer sparkle and glow Alas you have changed since last December So full of life, but now you are shallow Your personality has discolored all At once from when you had a heart of gold You fell out of my life like leaves of fall Once so close, you are not here as of old You saw me today, as you remember My eyes still sparkle unchanged and tender I am still the same since last December I saw you today, my heart surrendered If only loving you was not so tough Closed off to the world "we" would be enough

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/13/2019 6:21:00 PM
WOW! Sophia, your words flow like water over glass well done! GREAT first poem
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Date: 10/17/2019 7:50:00 AM
Nicely done Sophia. The flow of this was smooth and fun to read.
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Date: 10/17/2019 5:09:00 AM
Hi Sohia, Welcome to Poetry Soup, new friend! You are a gem of a writer. And this is a great sonnet. Please do share more of you with us. Happy Sails at the Soup!
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