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Love Lingers On

If you look into my eyes you will believe You now own a place in them to live Yours is the only face they see these days And still wish you to be infront of me always !!! I feel fresh I feel alive when you just look into my eyes My knees go weak and blood doesnt flow in my head when you give that smile, it gives a cheering day ahead!! I can hold your hand and walk with you Every step that you will want me too I will never let you walk alone And be there to hold you from falling off a stone!! I dont know what you think what you feel Why all of a sudden you make dreams so real If you are my destiny or just a path to tread But with you around I feel my life blessed!! For a moment you were there like forever And another seized your existence all together Now I am not sure what to think and what to believe Heart always confuses me and head cannot perceive!! I am not aware what has gone into me All I could do is keep thinking about it Sometimes positive sometimes negative Unsure of what to make out of it !!

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Date: 7/31/2024 12:00:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/13/2016 10:18:00 AM
Shruti, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "LAST CALL" if you like. ((( note from MEakaPD Thank you ALL for waiting and chilling, while I sat on the sideline. Since March 1st, I moved to the 4th largest city in the USA (by population.) One of the hardest decisions EVER-EVER!!! I will keep short on my visits until April 1st. After that, there's no holding me back LOL -unless God has other plans. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Shruti Chamadia
Date: 3/13/2016 12:06:00 PM
All the very best for your new adventures :) Thank you for congratulating me, but which win are you talking about?
Date: 2/28/2016 8:15:00 AM
Shruti,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Shruti Chamadia
Date: 2/28/2016 10:48:00 PM
Thank you for welcoming me here and lending me a helping hand.

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