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I spent so many years searching for the way… to joy and peace, a feeling of security. There were days when I was lost among the worries and fears. My tears were always there for me, in hues of darkness, a murky grief. I wasn’t always who I am today. I searched for love in strangers I’d meet. I sought love in the crowds, in dreams, in seas of silent souls who were only there to consume my kindness and let me touch the exhaustion of my weakening compassion. I rummaged the cities and towns, explored all the wonders I found, combed the expanse of the mountains, grasping at hopes that would only bring despair. It took me many years to finally see… this way that I sought was darker than the shadows that lifted when I finally knew, it was the wonder of wonders, the prince of peace, the king of kings, who I needed to seek. It took only moments to finally believe that Jesus was alive – living in me, and I’d been set free! Oh, yes, I believe! love lifted me up poured joy in my empty cup freed my heart from sin Haibun- With A Message Poetry Contest Sponsored by: charles messina November 12, 2021

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Date: 12/21/2021 8:17:00 PM
God's amazing grace is the only way to true spiritual peace. A blessed haibun, Regina. Congratulations on your placement in Charlie's contest.
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Date: 12/19/2021 8:08:00 PM
“believe that Jesus was alive – living in me, and I’d been set free” ~ Truth Absolute! Congrats on your win, Gina, keep spreading love and light
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Date: 12/18/2021 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. An amazing write and picture. Love your line, "Oh, yes, I believe!" Great.... Have a blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 12/18/2021 3:08:00 AM
Gina, great message here. We must always remember the prince of peace is always by our side. Lovely...Congratulations on your 1st place win! Love & hugs, Charlie
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Date: 12/17/2021 6:09:00 AM
The best message that one can ever get and pass on, Gina, congratulations:)
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Date: 12/17/2021 6:06:00 AM
The best of the best - Jesus is our peace. He forgives all our sins. He gives us mercy and grace and an inheritance in heaven but the greatest joy is Jesus Himself!! Congratulations, Gina!
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Date: 12/17/2021 5:32:00 AM
A beautiful haibun with a great haiku. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/14/2021 4:51:00 AM
Lovely autobiographical message, Gina:)
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