Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Love Lies

Je suis accro à vos lèvres, ils me rendent fou

Drawn the attraction drowns 
screams pulled to seduction 

   pushed away nights 
   lead to dawn 
   where griped moons 
   wash ashore 

Soft eyes smile  anxiously 
moist lips melt  chilled fright 

   wrap around scents of happy 
   filter off a delicate daisy 
   drops of dew linger on petals 
   of a perfect moment  spent 

Song birds arise off a blanketed blind
chasing winds before they begin to fade 
first rays of light dance with sated hearts 
eyes blink,  fingers entwine,   love lies

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Freddie Robinson Jr. August 29, 2017 at 9:13 AM A very interesting and compelling poem, Tim. Beautiful imagery expressed by your pen. Love and peace.

Phyllis Babcock August 28, 2017 at 1:02 PM Very descriptive write Tim. Enjoyed. love phyl

Dale Gregory Cozart August 28, 2017 at 11:22 AM This really is beautiful.

Winged Warrior August 28, 2017 at 10:00 AM Are you lying about this verse lol...very well put Tim...enjoyed, my friend...god bless...^WW^

Akkina Downing August 28, 2017 at 9:40 AM Beautiful... love those two last lines :)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 28, 2017 at 3:55 AM - "Love Lies" .... is a strong assertion, Tim :) - A beautiful poem - "happy filter off a delicate daisy " ... love that line - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White August 28, 2017 at 12:49 AM Oww, wonderful my friend. And yeah, does love lie, or does it lie? Love this, Tim.

Arthur Vaso August 27, 2017 at 8:22 PM You sure got the title right! Loved this! Ca c'est sur!

Dean Wood August 27, 2017 at 7:57 PM This is gorgeous. So full of feeling. "scents of happy filter off a delicate daisy". Great imagery, sights, scents, sounds, feelings. Even the morning songbirds chip in to make this a FAV for me.

Seren Roberts August 27, 2017 at 7:33 PM Lol Tim I also thought of lies as in other definition....great write .....Seren

Vijay Pandit August 27, 2017 at 7:11 PM WOW! May be it does lie sometimes.

Lin Lane August 27, 2017 at 6:33 PM This turned out to be the flip side of what I expected...you're such a sly one. ;-)

Heidi Sands August 27, 2017 at 6:32 PM I like the song bird line Tim. and the line first rays of light dance with sated hearts. Very nice :)