Love Lies

Je suis accro à vos lèvres, ils me rendent fou Drawn the attraction drowns screams pulled to seduction pushed away nights lead to dawn where griped moons wash ashore Soft eyes smile anxiously moist lips melt chilled fright wrap around scents of happy filter off a delicate daisy drops of dew linger on petals of a perfect moment spent Song birds arise off a blanketed blind chasing winds before they begin to fade first rays of light dance with sated hearts eyes blink, fingers entwine, love lies

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/29/2017 9:13:00 AM

A very interesting and compelling poem, Tim. Beautiful imagery expressed by your pen. Love and peace.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/28/2017 1:02:00 PM

Very descriptive write Tim. Enjoyed. love phyl

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 8/28/2017 11:22:00 AM

This really is beautiful.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/28/2017 10:00:00 AM

Are you lying about this verse lol...very well put Tim...enjoyed, my friend...god bless...^WW^

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/28/2017 9:40:00 AM

Beautiful... love those two last lines :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/28/2017 3:55:00 AM

- "Love Lies" .... is a strong assertion, Tim :) - A beautiful poem - "happy filter off a delicate daisy " ... love that line - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White

Date: 8/28/2017 12:49:00 AM

Oww, wonderful my friend. And yeah, does love lie, or does it lie? Love this, Tim.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/27/2017 8:22:00 PM

You sure got the title right! Loved this! Ca c'est sur!

Dean Wood

Date: 8/27/2017 7:57:00 PM

This is gorgeous. So full of feeling. "scents of happy filter off a delicate daisy". Great imagery, sights, scents, sounds, feelings. Even the morning songbirds chip in to make this a FAV for me.