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Love Letter To a Black Widow

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Love Letter Courting a Black Widow Spider I do admire your knitting skills The sight of your cobweb fills me with thrills Your hourglass figure glowing red has never gripped my heart with dread The sight of you a passion rare instills So I could never believe, as I view fresh kills that the day we wed, I’ll be next day’s meals

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/9/2023 7:06:00 AM

Love the twist at the end, SuZ. Fun poetry! Thanks for sharing my friend. Bill

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/9/2023 11:46:00 AM

So glad you got a chuckle from the macabre, Bill

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/31/2023 10:35:00 AM

Yikes, scintillating ode from the male black widow spider's POV, you wrote it splendid wow!! Its a femme fatale spider eh. >>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<< Plz also read and comment my newest poem

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/9/2023 11:47:00 AM

Thanks Zaynab. Glad you enjoyed my silly spider humor. SuZ

Deb M

Date: 5/29/2023 2:25:00 AM

Great poem Suz ….spiders freak me out so not loving that picture ewwww!! Debx

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/29/2023 3:25:00 AM

Ha ha Deb: I like them to keep their distance especially the venemous kind of which Australia mostly has. Good to see you today. SuZ

Ann Cantu

Date: 5/22/2023 11:29:00 AM

Refreshing to once again read the rhymes you so deftly weave my friend. Wonderful personification (or arachnidification?). I love it.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/22/2023 4:07:00 PM

Great to see you, Annie. It always warms my heart when two former About .com poets visit on the same page.

Timothy Ray

Date: 5/19/2023 6:42:00 PM

ask Little Miss Muffet about spiders...love the lightness of this....i see you two now...heading North on the Highway...my prayers are with you

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/20/2023 3:59:00 PM

Hi Timray: Hope you had a fun Birthday in your new location. We had a very easy road trip and now settling back in to BF. All is well here and thanks for reading. Hugs. Pix

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2023 10:25:00 AM

Ha, an amusing one in the view of a gullible soul!!! Great job, Suz.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/20/2023 3:57:00 PM

Hi Andrea: Glad you enjoyed this POV from a male spider, Strange….they jump in knowing the consequences LOL SuZ

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/13/2023 11:56:00 PM

Chills are running up and down my spine! Best not to join her for a meal mate!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/14/2023 8:58:00 AM

Ha ha BJ: Glad you got a thrill from it. SuZ

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/10/2023 7:09:00 PM

Sounds like a Mother's Day event to me --- in the 'Not-Sense!!'

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/11/2023 6:22:00 AM

Ha ha GW…just don’t serve her Breakfast in Bed. SuZ

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/10/2023 2:56:00 PM

Great poem, beautiful spider, however if you don't mind, I'll just admire the photo. Great to see you today, SuZ:)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/11/2023 6:24:00 AM

Dan : I totally understand and ‘cause the human equivalent is out there so better beware, Ha ha SuZ

Ann Peck

Date: 5/10/2023 2:23:00 PM

HaHa! A good one! She's one spider I don't like. Well, actually, I don't want any of them around. :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/11/2023 6:28:00 AM

Ha ha Thanks Ann: In Australia there was a saying when people had outdoor water closets. “Always check under the toilet seat.”