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IF LOOKS COULD KILL My dearest darling delectable Medusa I was wearing dark glasses on the day we first met You wanted your hair done, but it was no use-a as venomous snakes should be treated by a vet! It was obvious that you’d once been so pretty But you’d been cursed by that wicked Athena Then been banished from town and the city Your beauty gone; Athena couldn’t have been meaner! I love to caress your angel like wings As writhing asps kiss your hideous ears You’re the one who pulls at my heartstrings I’ll be your love throughout our twilight years One look from you can turn men to stone I wear dark glasses so it doesn’t affect me My love for you has blossomed and grown We’ll be together forever for eternity Sponsored by Viv Wigley Love letter II Contest 3/24/18

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 4/16/2018 12:36:00 AM

Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Jan - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2018 1:04:00 AM

Thanks Greg:-) hugs Jan xx

Mick Talbot

Date: 4/12/2018 9:00:00 AM

Full of Jan humour, hiss-specially suggesting she pays a visit to the vet for a hairdo, congratulations on your placement... hugs Mick

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2018 9:04:00 AM

LOL Mick great comment I can't resist adding a touch of wit especially for a contest sponsored by Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/10/2018 2:19:00 AM

This was so entertaining Jan. I am happy to see it high on the list. Congratulations on your third placement! : )

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2018 9:03:00 AM

I was delighted to be on the list Connie, I was saddened so many people didn't follow the rules - Viv was too kind i wouldn't have placed them at all. i hope he has lots of fun entries for the new contest he needs all the smiles he can get at this sad time. hugs jan xx

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/9/2018 10:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A delightful read.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2018 9:02:00 AM

Thanks so much Susan:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/9/2018 2:55:00 PM

Such a fun write, Jan! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem! Congratulations on your fine, podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2018 2:56:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Rob Carmack

Date: 4/8/2018 11:37:00 PM

Congrats Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2018 4:11:00 AM

Thanks Rob, I sure felt for Viv with some of the poems he received, I agree with his comments on the blog, yours should have placed higher and personally I wouldn't have placed those that didn't follow the simple rules. Let's hope the limerick contest brings smiles for him:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 4/8/2018 9:33:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2018 10:45:00 PM

Thanks Eve I was delighted to be on the winners list:-) hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/8/2018 3:32:00 PM

Congratulations Jan, your poem reflects an imaginary journey into forbidden taboo pleasures of the mind. Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2018 3:35:00 PM

Thanks Emile, we chose the same subject but our themes were so so different:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/8/2018 2:17:00 PM

Great win Jan , congratulations. Tom.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2018 2:20:00 PM

Thanks Tom I was glad to be on the list, I feel for Viv with the many people who didn't follow the rules I think he was too kind as many other sponsors would have given them n/a. hugs jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 4/8/2018 2:08:00 PM

What a cool hairdresser. Congratulations Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2018 2:13:00 PM

lol thanks jean:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/8/2018 12:23:00 PM

Aha, reads like a RayBan Chandler novel. Congrats, jan, thanks for entering x

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2018 2:12:00 PM

Thanks so much Mr Viv, i'm delighted to be on your winner's list:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/28/2018 6:19:00 PM

I wondered where you imagination would take you, but never did I imagine Medusa! This was such a fun read, your creativity and humor shines. I don't like it that Athena is responsible because that is the name of Tim's twin, and I'd never put that together before. I can't even look at Medusa in movies and here you are loving on her! Pure Jan, purely good! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2018 12:47:00 AM

Thanks CayCay I think Athena is such a pretty name! I did a little research before writing the poem but didn't do the whole story... just a little poetic licence and fun as i struggle with romantic writes lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 3/25/2018 12:07:00 PM

If she's for hire, what's she charge to turn men to stone with her look? I can offer her a job(s). Terrific write, Jan, as though you traveled along with Odysseus.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/25/2018 4:30:00 PM

LOL Lin, i just got this silly idea in my head and the poem formed. I originally planned to do about a superhero and then I re-read the rules ... what a numpty I am at time:-( hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 3/25/2018 9:46:00 AM

lovely write , Jan , very creative...hugs eve

Jan Allison
Date: 3/25/2018 4:29:00 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/25/2018 2:11:00 AM

So creative to choose Medusa! No one does that! Yet you did, and it was marvelous. I really like this one, Jan. It's all of that and a bag of chips for me.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/25/2018 4:06:00 AM

Thanks Caren:-) I had fun with the contest:-) hugs jan xx