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LOVE LETTER II

LOVE LETTER II About a mile past McKinley Pond Lived a girl of whom I was very fond Golden tresses framed her face Seeing her made my heart race Eyes like copper, sparkling bright Watching her was quite a sight Strolling the meadow every day Picking up pawpaws along the way I wanted to tell her what was on my heart But I didn't know just where to start I decided I'd mail her a little note And these are the words I finally wrote You are the girl of my fondest dreams My thoughts flow like mountain streams I watch you as you stroll carefree But don't think you ever noticed me I see you from my hiding place And marvel at your gorgeous face At night my dreams are all of you I wake up wondering what to do To let you know I hope to find The words to ask you to be mine Now you know just how I feel So I pray you tell me that you will She wrote back and said to me I'll be yours and you will see That all your dreams will soon be true Because I feel the same way too 23 March 2018 For the contest sponsored by Viv Wigley

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Date: 4/16/2018 12:47:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Curtis - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 4/16/2018 6:01:00 AM
Greg. what a genuine pleasure to hear from you. Thank you so much for your comment. It is encouragement such as this that keeps me penning. You have been a great inspiration to me and I truly appreciate your support and the bond of friendship that exists between us over the miles.
Date: 4/9/2018 10:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 4/16/2018 5:59:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. I apologize for being late in my response to you but I have been out of sync for a few days with speaking engagements and business deals. Life is what it is. lol I appreciate your support and enjoy reading what you write.
Date: 4/8/2018 9:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Curtis! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 4/9/2018 2:08:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. I always receive congrats from you. It encourages me and keeps me wanting to write.
Date: 4/8/2018 7:04:00 PM
Lovely letter, Curtis. Congrats on your poem.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 4/9/2018 2:06:00 PM
As always, Line, grateful thanks for your support. I appreciate it and can always expect a response from you.
Date: 3/28/2018 6:23:00 PM
Though I'm not sure who you selected as the recipient of you love, I loved how you loved her via your letter, the tender and sure words, and, of course, the happy ending. The rhyme and flow served your tail quite well, making the entire poem a delight to read! I enjoyed. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/28/2018 7:05:00 PM
CayCay, what a wonderful comment. It is fiction only in the poem, but my romantic nature is showing itself in every word. Thank you so much for your invaluable support and your kind words.
Date: 3/24/2018 10:17:00 AM
aww how beautiful and romantic Curtis, I think this would be the dream of many but they aren't brave enough to make that very move. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/24/2018 10:35:00 AM
Thanks, Jan! You are always so kind and honest in your responses. I appreciate your encouraging way. You keep me wanting to write and do it better.
Date: 3/23/2018 5:25:00 PM
Nicely written. I'm glad the man was able to muster up the courage to tell the lady what's in his heart. Sadly, many aren't ever able to. We can never know what we may find, if our heart can't speak its truest mind. :)
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/23/2018 11:46:00 PM
Hi,Sharon! It seems as if I've found a new Soup friend who is as much a romantic as I. I love your interpretation based on my poem, and I agree. Thank you for your comments.
Date: 3/23/2018 1:56:00 PM
Beautiful rhyme Curtis, good luck in the contest. Tom
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