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Love Letter

Letter left typed in and out A keystroke lifted to begin The space between the letter the gap A loving strike to represent To write to expel the letter with love Sincerely noting each stroke left upon A page white blank space looking empty Combining the timing with words on screen To bring to life a letter typed intermingling Between lines spent time written The love to take to make and spread Leaving each one to form a text Messaging the closeness kept Divided letter by letter the love built with breath To take care of the words we send Technology meant the union seen in wording A letter of love to the undeserving When looking at love as one letter first The eyes to see taught once upon a time to read One eye right the other left With both in use we may learn our best Love letter to you distant daily Observation

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Date: 11/9/2017 2:47:00 AM
Feel free to ask at anytime..
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Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/9/2017 1:10:00 PM
Thank you for being available to ask. You may have noticed I decided to take the time to simply guess on all my other poems until I can better educate myself on the possible forms I unknowingly wrote. ;-)
Date: 11/8/2017 1:07:00 PM
Instead of 'I do not know' you can call this one a free verse poem.. This is a very good poem and I like the simple line about one eye right and the other left, its simple, but its that kind of line that makes you say, oh yeah, brilliant!
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Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/8/2017 2:59:00 PM
Thank you Silent One. Your comment and suggestion to change the form of my poem is one I have been seeking due to my unfinished education. Each time I read that there are moments of brilliance and like from another poet with more skill than I it is very encouraging. Have a great day!
Date: 11/8/2017 10:55:00 AM
Kristina, very visual and enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/8/2017 12:45:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Have a great day! :-)

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