Love Lesson- Daddy-Son

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Zzzzz Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 2:17 AM
Excellent little poem. I love the second line, with its double meaning (wheels on toys; wheels in the mind). Well done!
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May 23, 2011 at 9:30 PM
thank you sir. i try to place several meanings, as many as I can, into short poems. My Son (sun) is the Ray (ray) Ray is part of his name. I believe it add to the piece. Sort of an apology for the length. :) ~JSLambert
Brown Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on your win Joseph in Linda-Marie's contest "Magnet Marvel". Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 6:59 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest. This reminds me a bit of Bobby Goldsboro's hit song of yesteryear "Watching Scotty Grow".
Freeman Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Great to see you in the top ten Joseph with this honorable win in ninth place. Congratulations on your honored win. Agape, Moses
Neels Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Joseph congratulations on your win with this gem ;)
Poet Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 7:42 AM
Wonderful poem on your son,joseph!Congrats on your win--kashinath
Horsman Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 11:55 PM
A Ray of hope joseph, lovely message here, Enjoyed. congrats. Harry
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 10:28 PM
Very nice, joseph. Congratulations
Johnson Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 7:57 PM
Nice words for your son. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 6:54 PM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest of Linda, joseph
Kendrick Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 4:04 PM
Congratulations..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 3:06 PM
Congrats Joe on your success in my magnet contest ..with these sweet and sensitive words luv.. thankxx for your support...
Sweetheart Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 6:58 AM
thannkxx Joseph for supporting my current contest .. good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of each submission to the contest.. welcome aboard and if u need any help navigating the site just ring up the "Sweetheart" ..luv..
Arteaga Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 12:46 AM
i guess you can't sleep niether? lol (or we're in different time frames >.>) very cute dodoitsu, the ray of sunshine, the ray of light that guides, the ray as of king. :D thanks for your comments sir n.n
K. Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 12:22 AM
I just bet he is! And I am sure he takes after you :D! and haha sorry to disappoint Joseph but Mayumi is not a booger, lol O_o -- if she was, that is one looker of a booger!! LOL - and haha eek! you remembered my comment to your comment in Debbie's poem? oh shucks I am embarrassed! blush, blush--I'll make sure to dial discreetly HAHa! Thanks for dropping by my poem-- it is finished now-- maybe you want to take another boog, umm I mean look? thanks :D
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 11:40 PM
Sweet as can be, joseph!
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