Poesy Relish Poet Free verse

Love Justice

Love, a curse or a boon
a query that has grown
there exist a lucky few
who hath tasted this feeling true

Young love likens a rosebud
pure and delicate, unshed
canst not get enough of the other
forever dying to be together
hearts thudding furious
pulse racing and curious
earnest to explore in negligence
the new world bathed in brilliance
like a bud eager to bloom
and bee to devour

(Love is justified)

Time flies in dalliance
love blooming with experience
with it comes trust
and assurance a must
here and then they falter
unable to alter
bud devoid of the dew
fragrance fading in lieu

(Is love justified?)

The rose now in full bloom
as love on its way to doom
arduous is the test of love
withering away if not conveyed
chiding and belittling the other
love start its decline and wither

It has happened time and again
repeating itself in vain
alas! In the minds of those
the answer still remain!!!

© Nadiya (18 Jan '15)

*Honorable Mention on 25 Jan 2015 in the contest 'Love justice' by Justin Bordner.

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Funom Makama February 16, 2015 at 12:16 PM I am in love with your lines... This is a great piece and I hope to spend more time on your other works. Thank you for the incredible share Poesy Relish February 16, 2015 at 10:52 PM Thank you Funom... i enjoy reading you writes as well... your feedbacks are always welcom... nad!

Pandita Sietesantos January 26, 2015 at 12:36 PM Excellent write with beautiful imagery - no wonder it is a winner! Congratulations, my friend! Pandita. Poesy Relish January 26, 2015 at 1:48 PM Thank you Pandita for your pleasing words... appreciate your visit... love nad!

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen January 25, 2015 at 10:58 AM Congratulations Nadi over your winning.Well done.Walk more long. -Safa Poesy Relish January 25, 2015 at 12:08 PM Thank you Muhammad...appreciate your comment and visit.

Abdul Malik Mandani January 25, 2015 at 9:08 AM "Love's Labor's Lost!" You've traced the tale of love. With all its pitfalls and heartaches, it's still worth it-withered or in full bloom! Nice write. Poesy Relish January 25, 2015 at 12:10 PM Thank you Malik for taking time to visit, read and comment on my poem... pleased that you have deduced what i had in mind.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 25, 2015 at 2:29 AM Congratulation on your HM. Love Nad>rajat Poesy Relish January 25, 2015 at 6:08 AM Thank you friend

Skat A January 25, 2015 at 12:10 AM Hi Nadiya, always pleased to read every entry on any contest list. Congratulations on your HM. Luv ~SKAT~ Poesy Relish January 25, 2015 at 6:07 AM Thank you friend

Arthur Vaso January 19, 2015 at 9:13 PM So beautiful and romantic, and being a romantic I will say love only withers when we stop to water, and how easily love is regained when we tend back to the garden of devotion! Poesy Relish January 20, 2015 at 12:21 AM Thank you Arthur... your comments are a pleasure to read... agree with you that love needs constant tending and attention... nad!

Richard Lamoureux January 19, 2015 at 7:24 PM This is an excellent entry for Justin's contest. I suspect he will be pleased. Poesy Relish January 20, 2015 at 12:19 AM Thank you Richard... pleased to know that my entry is worth for the competition... nad!