Love Is Too Blind

L anguishing in this sad torturing state
O nly my mind to rip me into shreds.
V acant of hope, she warned it was too late
E very day since my thoughts are in deep reds.
I nflicting the misery my heart needs,
S he left me with only this one sad choice.
T o cut my torn heart until out it bleeds,
O ver the sound of my lost wailing voice.
O pen your merciful heart my sweet friend,
B e my angel, return life back to me!
L augh and dance, do it all over again
I n that new paradise, we have that key.
N othing to lose and everything to gain,
D eliver my relief from this great pain.

Robert J. Lindley, 2-08-2016
Sonnet acrostic (tail-rhyme)- LOVE IS TOO BLIND.
Debbie's 6/6/6 challenge 
Number three


Syllables Per Line:	
10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10
Total # Syllables:	140
Total # Lines:	14 (Including empty lines)
Words with (syllables) counted programmatically:	
Total # Words:	109

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Date: 3/7/2016 6:13:00 PM
Adding this to my fav..
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Date: 3/6/2016 8:34:00 PM
The poem shows how talented you are...you are immensely talented and I feel proud to post my comment on this brilliant write... ''N othing to lose and everything to gain, D eliver my relief from this great pain.''..my fav
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Date: 2/14/2016 10:47:00 PM
A brilliant piece Robert... splendid rhyming, smooth cadence, vivid imagery and sublime content. Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 2/13/2016 10:01:00 AM
Another good one ... and an acrostic too boot, I'm impressed. I once started writing an sonnet / acrostic, and then towards the end it came to my attention that my acrostic was a 15 letter word, not 14! How silly of me! So I ended up turning into a joke instead, at the end.
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Date: 2/11/2016 11:56:00 PM
Wow...is this still for Debbie's challenge? I'm learning! May take a stab at it next time. Keep up your excellent work, Robert!
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