Vijay Pandit Poet Lyric

Love Is the Prize

When the night was dark
For the moon was hiding
And the stars in the galaxy refused to shine
You came to find me with ebullient vibes
And the dawn of sunrise

You fetched my water when I was thirsty
Feeding my hunger like an angel of mercy
Setting on fire every breath of desire
With ebullient vibes and the dawn of sunrise
Love is the prize when passions rise

That's how I found
In a romantic sound
Deep in my heart
A treasure full of wants
Desires so strong lost for a while
Till you came along

You fetched my water when I was thirsty
Feeding my hunger like an angel of mercy
Setting on fire every breath of desire
With ebullient vibes and the dawn of sunrise
Love is the prize when passions rise

Hosting princely charm
You romanced my form
Stealing me away from ordinary bounds
Healing my feelings with a tip of your crown
And the love you found

You fetched my water when I was thirsty
Feeding my hunger like an angel of mercy
Setting on fire every breath of desire
With ebullient vibes and the dawn of sunrise
Love is the prize when passions rise


July 28, 2018
HM: Your choice (12) love verse by Brian Strand
Lyrics inspired by the song:
Love Will Keep Us Alive by Eagles

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Valsa George August 6, 2022 at 9:29 AM Absolutely wonderful and beautifully romantic ! Vijay, you handle love with the fervency of one deeply in love and your poem here is rich in musical quality with the refrain enhancing the effect....

Brandy Nicole June 22, 2019 at 8:38 PM You keep Love alive, through your words. These moments of your heart. This is beautiful. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. (There is no Honorable Mention) In my eyes. Words from the heart always caress the sky. :) Brandy

L. J. Carber June 22, 2019 at 9:48 AM Congrats Vijay--nicely done!

Paul Callus December 22, 2018 at 7:12 AM Very lovely romantic lyrics including a superb refrain, Vijay. I wonder how I had missed this beauty! Enjoyed the Eagles song, too. Regards // paul

Vladislav Raven October 23, 2018 at 9:35 AM Hi Vijay, this is an excellent lyric from your pen. The imagery is strong and the words sing so easily. A most wonderful love song my friend. You write love so easily. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike. A fave. Vijay Pandit October 23, 2018 at 9:58 AM Thank you Mike--appreciate the kind feedback my friend.

Gary Bateman August 17, 2018 at 6:42 AM Hello Vijay, A wondrous lyric in every respect!! Masterful imagery and quite excellent. Cheers and Best, Gary Vijay Pandit August 17, 2018 at 2:51 PM Thank you Gary.

John Hamilton August 16, 2018 at 11:05 AM This is a great lyric Vijay, I can picture this as a song, it's great when another song inspires us right! Love will keep us alive...one of my faves from the Eagles. Vijay Pandit August 17, 2018 at 2:50 PM Thank you John..it means lot coming from an expert creator of beautiful songs.

Robertina B. August 9, 2018 at 4:34 PM "Vijay, so beautifully written.. Spectacular imagery! This masterpiece of yours is completely spellbinding, my friend.. One of my favs!! Blessings!" Vijay Pandit August 9, 2018 at 5:27 PM Thank you Robertina..appreciate the kind feedback.

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2018 at 2:23 PM Vijay I wish you would enter more contests. I came here hoping maybe you had done the four line challenge on a poem about love. I bet you would have written a stunner! Vijay Pandit August 9, 2018 at 7:17 AM Your vote of confidence means a lot Andrea. Many thanks. I could have written one on love..but four lines I found constraining. You are right..I am being selective about the contests I write for.

David William Breidenthal August 7, 2018 at 5:53 AM Intriguing and excellent poem! -jwe Vijay Pandit August 7, 2018 at 7:28 AM Thank you JW.

Besma Riabi Dziri August 6, 2018 at 12:13 PM "Love is the prize when passions rise"! Inspiring line! Amazing what you have composed about love! The song is wonderful and inspiring! Love remains quite a mystery! Undefined! We will never cease to try to capture its scent and feel its ache and spill beauty about it. A great Lyric and a FAV. Always a great pleasure to read your poetry dear Vijay. Be blessed. Vijay Pandit August 6, 2018 at 1:33 PM Your analysis is always on mark, Besma--enjoyed reading your comments..many many thanks.

Pandita Sietesantos August 2, 2018 at 3:56 PM This is such a moving, beautiful tribute to a great love! We all are seekers of true love and if we are blessed to receive it, it is indeed a treasure to cherish! Wonderful lyrics my friend, penned by a truly romantic poet! Love it and it's a fave for me! Hugs and love. Pandita Vijay Pandit August 3, 2018 at 12:58 PM Thank you Pandita..I am delighted by your visit and kind feedback.

Heidi Sands August 1, 2018 at 7:04 AM Excellent Lyrics Vijay! Very well written :) Vijay Pandit August 1, 2018 at 8:32 AM Thank you Heidi--always happy to read your comments.

Charles Messina July 31, 2018 at 10:56 PM This is a beautiful poem, Vijay! Is there a better prize than love? Probably not...but this write is a prize for sure...All the best, Charlie Vijay Pandit August 1, 2018 at 6:49 AM Thank you Charlie for your visit and kind feedback.

Faraz Ajmal July 31, 2018 at 8:42 AM This poem of yours is absolutely wonderful and I love the imagery you have put in it, it is going directly into my fav, good luck my friend and have a really nice day Vijay Pandit July 31, 2018 at 3:48 PM Thank you Faraz..appreciate your visit and kind words.

Janice Canerdy July 30, 2018 at 5:54 PM Beautifully and dramatically descriptive, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit July 31, 2018 at 3:47 PM Thank you Janice.

Charlie Smith July 30, 2018 at 3:53 PM Great lyric Vijay, but can you sing??? Vijay Pandit July 31, 2018 at 3:47 PM Thank you Charlie.

Mike Gentile July 30, 2018 at 1:25 PM This have a lovely lyrical flow, Vijay! Your romantic images are captivating. I agree, love is the Prize!!! Vijay Pandit July 30, 2018 at 3:05 PM Thank you Mike.

Joseph May July 29, 2018 at 8:53 PM Beautiful lyrics Vijay...best wishes Vijay Pandit July 30, 2018 at 10:19 AM Thank you Joseph.

Andrea Dietrich July 29, 2018 at 2:59 PM You have such a way with imagery, Vijay. I hope you do well if this is for Emile's contest! Beautiful. Vijay Pandit July 29, 2018 at 4:12 PM I just wrote this for fun..not contest. There is no contest on this theme, anyway. Many thanks Andrea.

Demetrios Trifiatis July 29, 2018 at 1:07 PM My friend,Vijay, your poem soared me to heavens where beauty is more appreciated! I loved it! Vijay Pandit July 29, 2018 at 4:13 PM I am so pleased by your visit and comments my friend, Demetrios..many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose July 29, 2018 at 5:10 AM wow, when you listen you really listen, and when you write, you REALLY write . A fav in my book of very special poems. Have a wonderful day dear poet. Vijay Pandit July 29, 2018 at 8:16 AM A pleasure to read your comments Pixie..thank you for stopping by this morning with your valued feedback.

Susan Ashley July 28, 2018 at 9:57 PM Vijay, your amazing lyric is breathtaking in its tender and emotional beauty. Quite the moving and thrilling love song my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Vijay Pandit July 29, 2018 at 8:15 AM Thank you Susan..you write such soothing and delightful comments..I value your your feedback, my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong July 28, 2018 at 9:09 PM A very lovely song that celebrates the beauty of love and nature! My two favorite things. A creative piece my friend! ; ) Vijay Pandit July 29, 2018 at 8:13 AM Thank you Connie..your visit and kind words are much appreciated.

Harry Horsman July 28, 2018 at 4:03 PM Amazing creative words, everything about the poem, is so inspiring.. Vijay Pandit July 28, 2018 at 5:12 PM Thank you Harry..appreciate the feedback.

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