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Love Is Pain

cyst of time splintered night in silent ache. dim light of side lamp glistened halo of moon in some other universe, where I long to hold you captive in my own immortal galaxy. drape my darkness in your radiant sun hypnotized within your constellation, blessed by Venus in her silver light where I know you're mine forever. hold me or I'll float away... vestige of your kisses escalates passion. story sinks in ashen skies. Is love pain?

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Date: 10/12/2023 3:30:00 PM
Congratulations, Debjani. How deep and beautiful!
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Date: 10/12/2023 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations! :)
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Date: 10/11/2023 11:12:00 AM
- Love is not easy ... and it can be painful, Debjani - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/11/2023 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 10/11/2023 10:13:00 AM
Such a heartfelt and romantic one and i love the imagery and descriptive language you’ve used here in your perfectly written etheree! I love a double etheree and the fact that you used moon sun etc anr also expressed such longing and desires is so beautiful! I love that ending too! Is love pain? Good question: and “ hold me or ill float away” awwn! Brilliant! Thank you for writing! Congratulations
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Date: 10/7/2023 9:57:00 PM
This is a beautiful Etheree, dear friend on the vestige of kisses... and a love that has withdrawn into the ashen skies. The last question, 'Is love pain?' reverberates in many hearts ! Thanks for visiting my page. All the Best Debjani
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