Get Your Premium Membership

Love Is On The Way

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Lu Loo.


Image result for pic of a child holding hands with mom'

Memories f a d i n g..... I thought I knew abstract silhouettes and I was never right again. Sad moments tampered with breaking glass. A shadow’s remorse brought emptiness and now my darkness is the light of my life. Sweet agony remembered, as I pull up my sheets to fall asleep and no matter the distance between me and the door, I still need pain. Freedom comes from chains and chains reveal strength. Never let go dear one, for love is on the way. I thought I knew swirls of paint on the canvas as I sketched the outline too soon. I should have used charcoal instead of oil but my mind was racing in distress. I knew I’d be alone forever. I knew I’d be the only one left to live in torment from all my regressed sins. Never again will I fall on my knees to the ones who tear my heart apart. I shall always be strong for the weaknesses of the child who mourns her dear mother in sadness. She is me. I am her. We are ONE. I will remain in her arms as long as I take breaths. Oh, never let go dear one, for love is on the way. She sings melodies as a child should, yet bleeds in tears for love. Never again will she see the light of day if she sleeps on the streets. I have been there, one the streets I mean. Cold during the chill of winter and blazed during summer days. No season can relieve my burdens and no regret can fill my void. My void will never be full and my emptiness will always remain delivered. I beg of you, never let go dear one, for love is on the way. October 1, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/6/2016 3:57:00 PM
Please don't hit me Laura but I have to admit this is the first time I have REALLY read one of your poems and I am just BLOWN away...Every line is perfect and like Phillip, I got chills and a lump in my throat, especially the way you end each verse...WOW ---straight to my fav poet list you go - Tim
Login to Reply
Date: 10/5/2016 7:44:00 PM
Such poignancy and emotion in this one, Laura. Beautifully written, and so much from the heart ! Congratulations on your placement in PD's contest!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/5/2016 6:11:00 PM
Great write and win Laura...Congrats
Login to Reply
Date: 10/5/2016 11:29:00 AM
Laura, Congratulations on your awesome placement. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "from my pen" if you'd like. SMILES ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Date: 10/5/2016 6:25:00 AM
This is so sad, brought tears to my eyes. well written, Laura:)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2016 12:06:00 PM
so THAT's how free verse goes. This is a beautiful read. I'm proud to say I know the person who wrote it. Well done Laura - powerfully deep and heartfelt. Gave me chills and brought a tear. Goodness.
Login to Reply
Loo Avatar
Lu Loo
Date: 10/1/2016 12:32:00 PM
aww thank you sweet Phillip :)-luloo