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Love Is Not First Come First Serve

Love is not first come first serve Its felt comes unexpected No one really knows how it felt Sometimes unexplainable and exciting No one really knows how it happens You can only hope the one you love Has the feeling the same how you felt also The surprise is when you felt it There's a sudden burst of happiness Happiness that is wholesome and fulfilling There is a chemistry that attracts both body No matter what happen only both souls Knows the experience that is emotional Spiritual and lavish joy unexplainable.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/4/2025 11:50:00 AM

Hello Hugo yes you are right. that love must be felt by both people at the same time. An emotional feeling and spiritual one. Much love here. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/6/2025 7:17:00 AM

Hello Hugo, I love the comment to this poem. All you have said makes a lot of sense. Love you more. /Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 3/5/2025 5:50:00 PM

Yeah, love is not like lining to serve food. Real love surprise you a lot, it comes unexpected. You feel it sudden. No time, no place, no standard, it comes unaware. If it comes, happiness is unexplainable. No hold bars, no rules to follow. You became blind and sometimes feel fool. Real love is spiritual. It still relate to the salvation of the soul. Love you more, Darlene. /Hugo.