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Love Is In the Air

Bare footed wind is swaying the curtains Freeing the air from all its dewy burdens Letting the dim silvery moonlight Cast engolangated shadows at midnight It brings some melodies along Somebody, in distant, singing a song From the woods it comes, I can guess Their windows are not shut,  it suggests The night is dark, the night is cold A waning moon is rising and the wind is bold Yet the song is lovely and feels so sweet When sung for beloved , feelings are never offbeat 21st October, 2022

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Date: 2/27/2024 10:59:00 AM
Hello Paghunda Zahid, this is lovely. I will make this my fav. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 2/3/2024 11:08:00 AM
I felt so much emotion while reading your poem twice through. Nuances of mysticism, desire, and a dreamlike quality which made me expand. Loved this . Cheers to you dear Paghunda, Susan :)
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Date: 6/3/2023 7:17:00 AM
Dear Paghunda, a lovely yearning is felt through the beauty of the distant song and the romance of your tender verse. Your imagery is soulful and extraordinary! "Bare footed wind" - yes! I love it! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/31/2023 7:00:00 PM
Vivid imagery is evident. Keep it up.
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Date: 1/31/2023 11:28:00 AM
What a wonderful write. I wish you would write more. Have a great day.............
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Date: 12/17/2022 4:21:00 PM
Good description of this wonderful evening. Well done.
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Date: 10/30/2022 1:12:00 AM
You always write such romantic gentle poems which are a pleasure to read. This poem is awesome and your last verse tapers this excellent write perfectly, hugs and blessings Jennifer.- thank you for all your well wishes I absolutely love your presence on soup and I am getting better thank you.
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Date: 10/26/2022 12:36:00 AM
So beautiful poem my dear friend Paghunda. I love every line and your ending is great! Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 10/24/2022 12:15:00 PM
A love call with an ambiance hauntingly engaging, Paghunda! Robert
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Date: 10/24/2022 10:00:00 AM
You my dear friend Pagunda are destined for great poetic accolades in the future-you write with a talent and flair that is gentle, yet seductive and so rare. Well done my lovely beautiful sweet friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/24/2022 2:04:00 AM
For the whole world one hopes, Paghunda. Good poem.
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Date: 10/21/2022 10:17:00 PM
This song I hope, reaches more people than my Writes seem to Paghunda.' Great piece to read.'
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Date: 10/21/2022 10:11:00 PM
I love this poem, Paghunda. The imagery is magical. :)
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Date: 10/21/2022 8:45:00 PM
The song and the bold wind wafting through the moonlit night are exhilarating and add to the romantic temper. Lovely penning, dear friend
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/21/2022 9:45:00 PM
Thank you Valsa
Date: 10/21/2022 6:28:00 PM
Delighfully romantic Poetry Paghunda really enjoyed reading. A favorite. Thanks for sharing...
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/21/2022 9:45:00 PM
Thank you for your uplifting comment Michael. I’m pleased to know that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you
Date: 10/21/2022 4:38:00 PM
Very romantic poetry, Paghunda. It's hard to criticize a song that is communicating love. :-) I enjoyed your poem. Write On! my friend. Bill
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/21/2022 9:46:00 PM
I am humbled. It made me happy that you liked this poem. Best wishes
Date: 10/21/2022 3:03:00 PM
this is so lovely. very poetic, Paghunda.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/21/2022 9:47:00 PM
Thank you Lady
Date: 10/21/2022 1:33:00 PM
The sweet song and moonlight contribute to the romantic atmosphere of this lovely poem, Paghunda. Well done! Regards // paul
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/21/2022 9:47:00 PM
Thanks Paul, your words are received with gratitude. Regards

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