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Love is evil

 
I have fallen For that cocky smile And that gentle look That is etched on your face Every time I dare glance At you, my heart Stops beating and Time stops flowing It is impossible But yet is has happened I love you for a reason I still can’t comprehend Some say love is unpredictable And I say love is evil It laughs at me Every time I marvel At what could be Maybe one day You will turn around And see me But you will never Love me the way I love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/25/2014 9:42:00 AM
Tifanie.. Powerful, introspective write! Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes like this one.. Come check me out!
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Date: 10/19/2014 12:47:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Tifanie- I choose your first very well written poem I like it ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/19/2014 12:14:00 AM
Love this one!
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Date: 10/18/2014 11:08:00 PM
Well penned Tiffanie! I do hope he sees you the way you heart wish him to.nAnd welcome to P.S.! :) xxxx D.
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Tifanie Matthew
Date: 10/18/2014 11:17:00 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome, I've read some of your poems and they are pretty good!
Date: 10/18/2014 8:41:00 PM
Hi Tifanie, I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! Great way to get it going with an excellent piece! Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 10/18/2014 3:01:00 PM
Very Sweet with passion. Maybe one day you will turn the person around and that person will see you :)
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Tifanie Matthew
Date: 10/18/2014 3:59:00 PM
Thanks! Maybe one day...