Love Is Blind

I met her on a Monday at a place where drunkards meet,
my heart pounding loudly, my toes tapping with the beat.

On Tuesday we met for coffee at a place I always go,
I couldn't take my eyes of her, well her cleavage was quite low.

On Wednesday I met her family, the spitting image of her dad,
they both have a mustache, and hairy bottoms I might add.

On Thursday we went shopping, I took her to the mall,
at least until I lost her, as she's only one foot tall.

I found her on the Friday, wandering the street,
she couldn't make it home last night, she hasn't any feet.

Saturday we spoke of having a child, and I asked her if we can,
she said that might be a problem, as she used to be a man.

It's Sunday and a week has past, she was sent from up above,
I don't care what other people think, she's mine and I'm in love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Poe Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 8:32 PM
love is blind. so true. put a smile on my face -Alley
Herzog Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 11:42 AM
Dear Pawlu: What a vivid imagination you have. Funny, is what I thought of this piece. Good write! Thanks for reading my poem, I'm really glad you liked it. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
Hayton Avatar
April 4, 2009 at 2:46 PM
Again Pawlu, as Carolyn has said, this kind of humour is so wonderful to poetry soup, and its so heart warming too, it inspires me to try it out.. well done Pawlu, can't wait to read more.. Take care, Jo
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April 3, 2009 at 1:29 PM
What a story you tell, Pawlu! Thank you for gifting us with your great humor. I think this is the first poem of yours I have read. I can't wait to check out the others. You certainly bring something new to Poetry Soup! Love, Carolyn
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April 2, 2009 at 8:03 PM
This is just the funniest poem..you have me laughing out loud... Im going to check your other poems..I havent seen your name before but Ive so busy havent been able to do much on the soup..still laughing. BG
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