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::::Love In War::::

. Down mine self Locked within mine duke tramped on stony earth Whilst tears from mine comrade ‘Bout mine separated torso’s limb drops he lifts mine exhausted me

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2023 8:33:00 PM

So sad. Yes. It's about what I imagined.

James Peranteau
Date: 4/21/2023 4:40:00 AM

I have children in the Army and Marine Corp(career men).... sometimes i get lost in this fear...thanx for reading Andrea ;) much luv, james

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/20/2023 9:32:00 AM

A sad situation is war and the devastation it brings. Well expressed James. love phyl

James Peranteau
Date: 4/21/2023 4:41:00 AM

;)

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 2/19/2023 10:12:00 PM

in so few rods you expressed so much emotion, sad, but very touching.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2022 10:02:00 AM

Seems like a war poem. Nicely done!

James Peranteau
Date: 12/28/2022 5:56:00 PM

it iz dear poet...he had hiz arm shot off and hiz comrade picks him up whilst crying...happy holidayz Andrea...much love, james

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/19/2022 1:52:00 PM

What terrible situations people have endured James in wars to 'protect freedoms' and now I see a great deal of the catalysts were made Up..Utterly sickening.' Hope you are doing well'

James Peranteau
Date: 4/21/2023 4:35:00 AM

i concur dear poet...i pray your know uv joy sir ;) much luv, james