Love In This World

Love In This World

Find that one woman
to love in this world, 
and then give the world to her!

Never let her hand go,
always hold her hand, 
and she'll respect you better.

Be waiting for her, 
and when she sees this,
you'll have her for life!

When you can do that for just one
woman,
you'll have the greatest love ever.

I will not know my drowning, 
when I still love freely.

But I know my love for her;
I know; what she's done for me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/9/2021 10:36:00 AM
Lovely poem, William ~
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William Darnell Sr
Date: 8/9/2021 5:08:00 PM
Good Morning, Line! I am glad you found an appreciation in it for you to comment, thank you! Best of Wishes, William
Date: 8/7/2021 7:22:00 AM
William, beautiful sentiments within your poem, I am waiting for that kind of love also ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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William Darnell Sr
Date: 8/8/2021 8:16:00 PM
Hi, Constance! I hope your Sunday went fantastic? Thank you for the encouraging words and looking for that dance to be a dance with and the duet to burn with a flame. (I Hope He's Close By For You) But, Never give up on Hope; they, no offense, may still show up!? Possibilities to anything, are endless! And that's a beautiful thing, baby, yeah! New growth of anything starts every second. The minds amazing! Best of Wishes, William
Date: 7/9/2021 2:31:00 PM
Yes, treasure her. Wise advice.
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William Darnell Sr
Date: 7/12/2021 5:25:00 PM
Hey, Richard! Thank you for the sentiments concerning my poem. I've been away from the Soup for a while now; I picked my old hobbies back up on my road less traveled. I am coming home to live, where I need to learn how to live again from being away for so long. because of my old hobbies, I started drawing again and have been engrossed in doing it too. I have some material I think is ready, and I should write in my blog and explain my absence. Oh, you're welcome; I had to see what my friend had been up to! Take care & and God Bless you, Richard. Best of Wishes, William
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/9/2021 2:31:00 PM
Thanks for your visit. ;0)
Date: 7/8/2021 6:51:00 AM
Lovely poem. I liked your thoughts in this, if practiced they can bring much happiness in life for we get back what we give
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William Darnell Sr
Date: 7/9/2021 1:07:00 PM
Hi, Rama! Thank you, you're kind words are thoughtful. It is about my late wife: May she R.I.P., who has passed on now, and I'm still madly in love with her. So, I write of her often, plus we share Sundays. She's been gone fourteen years. Again, thank you. Best of Wishes, Willam
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