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Love In the Spirit Realm Ii

I reverence you here, away from fire and grime. Where no life claim, no earth rule, no dominion You and I are tethered within a spiritual sublime. Wind and seas stop inside the realm of opinion Where no life claim, no earth rule, no dominion. When nothing prevailed before our subsistence. Wind and seas stop inside the realm of opinion I admire you here, in the domain of real essence. When nothing prevailed before our subsistence. Ringed by embers that shatter, sear, and refine. I admire you here, in the domain of real essence. Where orchids bloomed amid the ash and shine. Ringed by embers that shatter, sear, and refine. When fall breezes carry melancholy to its abode. Where orchids bloomed amid the ash and shine. Where subtle veils of snow through valleys strode. When fall breezes carry melancholy to its abode. You and I are tethered within a spiritual sublime. Where subtle veils of snow through valleys strode. I reverence you here, away from fire and grime.
Written: May 06, 2022
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Date: 5/7/2022 3:19:00 PM
Another excellent and beautiful Pantoum, Sotto. This goes to my FAV list. Thanks for these enchanting words. The hope of a place so serene. Thanks for sharing from your soul my poet friend. Bless you and your poetry, Bill
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Date: 5/6/2022 9:42:00 AM
Everyone is afraid of pantoums. I dare not write one again. My muse is substandard.
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