Love In the Jungle

I sat with my best girl with such glee,
I bared my chest for her to see,
My hairy torso caused some alarm,
Her heart started fluttering under the palm,
Then we both swung away through the trees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Das Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 9:17 AM
Hahaha....nice one. Enjoyed this limerick...
Williams Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 5:05 AM
Thanks Nandita for stopping by----John
Nunez Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 8:59 AM
...and looked for bananas probably? lol! Good evening John! :-)
Williams Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Good evening Kim---yes, you got it-thanks Kim----John
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 8:34 AM
- Many secret meeting places in a jungle ;) - A good limerick, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 8:31 PM
Thank you Ann Lise for your lovely comments----kind regards----John
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