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LOVE IN MAY - Blackout Poem

¦¦¦ wind ¦¦¦ tossing ¦¦¦ lilacs,
¦¦¦ new leaves laugh ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ petals fall on the orchard ¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦

Beneath the apple blossoms
I go ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦
For love ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ in May.


(Blackout of "May" by Sara Teasdale:
The wind is tossing the lilacs,
The new leaves laugh in the sun,
And the petals fall on the orchard wall,
But for me the spring is done.

Beneath the apple blossoms
I go a wintry way,
For love that smiled in April
Is false to me in May.
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Anaya Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 8:48 PM
Omg, I got to try this! Yours unfolded beautifully almost haikulike. Nicely done, Sara~ a closing parentheses is needed somewhere.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 12:44 PM
Nice job! I tried doing a few of these but was not satisfied with results.
Kendrick Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 12:32 PM
Looks like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it. I need to see if I can get some of Sara Teasedale's works online. It seems like a very long time ago I read something she wrote. Sara K.
DiMino Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 8:27 AM
It happens unfortunately. Best to hibernate sometimes -- return fresh for a new growth season. Great poetry!
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