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Love implodes

I see only the brightness and beauty
       Of her eyes
            Golden hairs,
	           I am envious to caress her sun rays
                        As I discover the universe,	
	 			Thrusting into the abscess of loves black hole

The void of loves creation begins again




Notes: This poem was inspired by a recent poem here in soup, as a kinda contest, guess who that poet and poem is, and win first prize, if 100 guess the right answer, guess what, thats 100 first prizes!!!!! 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/31/2016 12:11:00 PM
Ah....and I was hoping it was me! ;) Lovely write, my dear....I like the passionate, sensual kind. Please, check your inbox! hugs
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Date: 6/5/2016 11:13:00 PM
As the Goddess of romance how could one even hope for the unattainable! Thank you so much kind heart! Hugs!
Date: 5/12/2016 12:02:00 PM
Beautiful in the most unique way.. Loving this piece so much
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Date: 6/5/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thank you Funom, inspired by Paris!
Date: 5/11/2016 6:01:00 AM
A lovely write, Arthur, and a lovely source of inspiration. T.J
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Date: 6/5/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Teppo! :)
Date: 5/6/2016 4:49:00 PM
I have no idea who, but if she inspired this write, you have honored her beyond measure! Excellent write Sir!
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Date: 6/5/2016 10:41:00 PM
It was the statue, in an undisclosed location in Paris! Thank you Walter.
Date: 5/6/2016 1:40:00 PM
I am going to say Andrea, but I actually don't know for sure. Beautifully written Arthur! #7 ; )
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Date: 5/7/2016 12:09:00 AM
Close!!! Casarah! Thanks Hugs!!!
Date: 5/6/2016 11:40:00 AM
I'm not guessing unless I know the prize. For all we know the prize could be one free week of cleaning the Vaso Estate....All I know is this is a terrific poem : )
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Date: 5/7/2016 12:08:00 AM
Actually you were pretty close, it was a week cleaning at your place!!! :)
Date: 5/6/2016 9:49:00 AM
I also have no idea about who or what inspired this, but wanted to drop in to tell you I really enjoyed this write. Well done, Sir. -G
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Date: 5/7/2016 12:09:00 AM
Very nice of you, It was Casarah's recent Haiku that inspired this!!!
Date: 5/6/2016 8:26:00 AM
lovely! but I have no idea who the poem was inspired by. It was a nicely written poem in all aspects!
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Date: 5/7/2016 12:07:00 AM
Thanks Meg! So sweet of you!