Maria Williams Poet Ballad

Love Hurts - Bound by Love, Broken by Fate - POTD

POTD - 25th September 2024

Synopsis - 

A bitter-sweet, hauntingly romantic and heart-wrenching ballad that follows her journey of sorrow and longing, as she searches for answers to a love torn apart. Watch as the story unfolds, revealing the depths of her heartbreak. Thank you for watching.

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Love Hurts - Bound by Love Broken by Fate

(Extracted from my Poem ‘The Train’ and made into Lyrics and a video.)

Mesmerised by the candy-coloured rainbow
Coy behind the fairy floss clouds
Through shimmering sunbeams, we gazed
My senses in overdrive
As memories surface
And hover back to
That one day
Boarding this very train
Squeals of joy
As cloudbursts unleashed rain

Chorus
But you left me
You took my heart and locked away the key
Squeezing into one seat
Wrists caressed and kissed
Floating to that intimate space
Sensual lips taste
Whispered promises
Sparking bright eyes
And blushing rosy face

Softly against my ear a hum
Our song
Fingers daring to trace
Burning paths
Through shredded threads
Faded jeans
Breathless on the high line
Us, giggling teens

Chorus
But you left me
You took my heart and locked away the key

Speeding through fields of wildflowers
Sparkling like diamonds with the fallen showers
The train hooted in joy
Through the rain splattered window amazed
Mesmerised by the candy-coloured rainbow
Coy behind the fairy floss clouds
Through shimmering sunbeams we gazed.

Chorus
But you left me
You took my heart and locked away the key

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James Chapman December 17, 2024 at 2:11 AM Maria! Simply heart pounding. Such beautiful and powerful lyrics. I love the song. I played it several times. Outstanding! Maria Williams February 1, 2025 at 3:27 AM Thank you James for your visit and review. So sorry for the late reply. I trust you enjoyed the others including my recent creation. Maria

Charles Messina November 22, 2024 at 2:12 PM Another masterpiece, Maria. Love the song but the song wouldn't exist if it weren't for your brilliant lyrics. Hugs Charlie PS: Also, belated Congrats on POTD Maria Williams November 24, 2024 at 7:19 PM Thank you so much Charlie for your uplifting encouragement. Hugs Maria

Phyllis Babcock November 16, 2024 at 9:32 AM Lovely song and beautiful words made into this song. Love can be so many things with so many memories that remain locked forever in our hearts. Congrats to you. love phyl Maria Williams November 16, 2024 at 11:42 PM Thank you Phyl for your visit and kind comments - Hugs Maria

Jennifer Proxenos November 1, 2024 at 12:50 AM What vivid beautiful memories you had of this love and sad are the chorus words, that he left you, broken and took away your heart 'and locked away the key.' Fortunately you were young and still able to build up a new life. Reading your memories both glad and ending sad in Ballad poetry form reveals your talent Maria - life is not always straight forward, or fair, but your poem is awesome. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Maria Williams November 3, 2024 at 12:47 AM Thank you Jennifer, it is only real life fiction that probably happens hundreds of time around the world and I wanted to make a poem of it. Lovely of you to visit and comment. Hugs and Blessings to you too

Valsa George October 14, 2024 at 5:51 AM Memories never die. They chase you like that of the speeding train where you both sat and travelled into a world of dreams once. From the pinnacles of joy and romance, the fall into the pit of despair is powerfully presented in the refrain---- "But you left me You took my heart and locked away the key" These lines create waves of pain in me too. Congratulations Maria on your POTD. Beautiful video. Enjoyed watching it. Maria Williams October 16, 2024 at 3:17 AM Thank you Valsa for your kind visit and congratulations. So glad you liked the video. Hugs Maria

John Read October 12, 2024 at 12:10 PM A well deserved POTD Maria, have a lovely weekend. Xx Maria Williams October 23, 2024 at 4:19 AM Thanks so much John...Hugs

Suzette Richards October 11, 2024 at 2:31 AM A somewhat belated congratulations on your POD, Maria. Lines that sweep one along to the inevitable lament: 'But you left me ...' FAVing it. X Su Maria Williams October 11, 2024 at 2:50 AM Thank you Su for your visit, congratulations, and liking this creation. Hugs Maria

Duke Beaufort October 9, 2024 at 11:56 AM Maria, no question that love can be great. It can also cause a heart to suffer loneliness and/or despair. It's all a learning experience and hopefully it brings us to a better place where true love exists with the right person. We do learn a lot about this as we grow. This poem has a lot of passion and is a pleasure to read. Smiles!! Maria Williams October 11, 2024 at 2:48 AM Thank you so much not only for your very insiteful comment but also for your visit Duke. I'm so glad you liked it - many more 'creations brewing in the melting pot' lol - Hugs Maria

Nette Onclaud October 5, 2024 at 10:14 AM a poem which touches the senses through its emotive lines... sweet congrats on your potd, Maria : thanks for your compliments on mine! Maria Williams October 6, 2024 at 7:02 AM Thank you for your visit Nette, It was a pleasure commenting on your poem too. Maria

Bill Baker October 4, 2024 at 9:26 PM Congratulations on your fine poem and video as POTD, my talents friend. I'm a few weeks late, but my account was unlocked today so I'm catching up on past POTD's. I hope you enjoyed your special day of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Maria Williams October 5, 2024 at 6:23 AM Hi Texas Bill, Great to see you back and thank you for your visit and for your congratulations. As soon as I have finished the current video we are working on, I'll do my rounds and visit more poets. Stay well - Hugs Maria

Besma Riabi Dziri September 30, 2024 at 11:03 AM As if I was watching a movie! The visual is so impressive and expressive! A high level of design and composition! Listening to the Ballad while reading your amazing words truly illuminated all the chambers of my heart! There is a secret magic in Love! We won't savour its mystery if we do not go through such state of longing and heart breat! We cannot realise what we are living if we do not undergo the twists of Love and Life! The flash backs added to that sweet ache as we miss what is of inestimable value for us! It is simply a HUGE WOW! dearest Maria! A poetess of grandeur wonderfully meets the splendor of Love! Truly so much enjoyed the read and the video! A masterpiece deserving the honour of POTD! Congratulations! So happy for a well earned recognition! My warmest wishes. Love and hugs. Maria Williams October 1, 2024 at 5:24 AM My dearest Besma,Your beautiful and thoughtful response has completely warmed my heart! I’m beyond grateful that you felt so immersed in the experience and that the visuals and words came together to create that “movie-like” feeling for you. Love really is a magical force that we can only truly understand by navigating its highs and lows. It’s amazing to hear that the flashbacks added that extra layer of emotion and nostalgia. Thank you for your kind words and for seeing the love and effort I poured into this piece. Your support means the world to me...Love and Hugs

Hiya Sharma September 30, 2024 at 6:43 AM Oh my goodness, what a heart-aching and deeply moving song you've crafted, dear Maria! That longing of forbidden love has been so eloquently painted within poignant shades of vulnerable feelings that become the reason of perpetual sorrow and grief.. My heart could feel the fragility on so many levels here...I am especially awestruck by the majestic atmosphere of the video and how you possess the artistic skills of converting words & feelings into lyrics that just touch the soul ~ so beautiful! "Boarding this very train" It was truly a bittersweet journey to witness! Reading your craft after a very long time, coming back her3 and I must say, it's always an impeccable experience. Keep shining and being yourself, sending hugs & light! Heartiest congratulations on POTD :) Maria Williams October 1, 2024 at 5:20 AM How wonderful to see you back dear Hiya, and your glowing comment is truly appreciated . Your words truly moved me! I’m so touched that you connected so deeply with the song and felt its emotional weight. Forbidden love can evoke such complex feelings, and I wanted to capture that raw, vulnerable essence. I’m thrilled to hear the atmosphere of the video resonated with you as well—it’s wonderful knowing it left an impact. Thank you for taking the emotional train journey with me and for your continuous support and encouragement. Sending hugs and light right back to you!

Sara Kendrick September 30, 2024 at 3:36 AM Interesting song written. May it go over well with the public. Sara K Maria Williams October 1, 2024 at 5:11 AM Thanks so much Sara, I appreciate your visit and well wishes...Hugs

Paul Callus September 30, 2024 at 1:56 AM This is such a beautiful poem, and that lies mostly in the fact that it pulls at my heart strings in a gentle and yet persuasive way, Maria. Young love is a topic which appeals to many, and you have aptly captured its joys and pains. I enjoyed the video; the Maria-Ron team is on a roll. ~ Congratulations on p.o.t.d. much deserved. Hugs // paul Maria Williams October 1, 2024 at 5:10 AM Thank you so much for your appreciation and kind words my dear friend Paul. I'm so glad the poem resonated with you and that you felt the emotions I was trying to convey. Young love can be such a beautiful yet bittersweet experience, and it means a lot to hear that it touched you. I shared your feedback with Ron—we’re thrilled you enjoyed the video. Your support encourages us to keep creating! Love and Hugs

John Read September 29, 2024 at 5:25 AM A well deserved POTD there's nothing better than a great love song. Well done Maria. Maria Williams September 29, 2024 at 6:49 AM Thank you John, so kind of you to visit and your congratulations. Well done to you too once again. Maria

Ink Empress September 28, 2024 at 2:01 PM Dear talented soul, This poem resonates with me on so many deep levels and its melodious how youve written the lyrics, has the poignant touch while also ensuring you paint imagery in such a picturesque manner! Sometimes when we feel like love did take everything within, leaving us empty, and in pain, we all feel this way, and you have expressed that very well for so many! I love the fairy floss clouds and also fields of wildflowers! You have a very elegant way of weaving words. And its just today i was thinking of writing a fairy inspired poem! Pleasure always reading your work! Sending you light always Maria Williams September 29, 2024 at 4:22 PM Dearest Ink, as always your presence and glowing comments are greatly appreciated my friend. From the bottom of my heart I thank you. I hope you will forever spread your light and love here on PS. So glad you liked the video. Love and hugs .

Heidi Sands September 27, 2024 at 8:21 AM This is absolutely beautiful. Congratulations :) Maria Williams September 28, 2024 at 4:56 AM Thank you Heidi, It's lovely to see you and thank you for your comments and congratulations. Maria

Kim Rodrigues September 27, 2024 at 6:32 AM Such lovely bittersweet lyrics! Congratulations on POTD, Maria! Maria Williams September 28, 2024 at 4:54 AM Thank you for your visit and congratulations Kim, so lovely to see you and I'm so glad you liked it. Maria

Sam Scott September 26, 2024 at 12:52 AM Gosh Maria, pass me the tissues :'-/ As always such beautiful words and the video is slick and emotive and works beautifully with the conversion to song. You guys really are producing some very polished and professional work. Well deserved Poem of the Day.. see you at the Oscars. Blessings S:) xx Maria Williams September 26, 2024 at 1:38 AM Oscars - I can only Wish. thank you for your complements and congratulations dear Sam. Hugs Maria

Christina Bowring September 25, 2024 at 11:54 PM Dear sweet Maria, many congratulations for POTD with this beautiful, emotive poem and video that further enhances and tugs at the heartstrings. You have captured so much angst, separation, longing of young, lost love that will never be forgotten and remembered with youthful reminders. You have skilfully captured the abandonment that draws the reader in. I love, ‘Candy - coloured rainbow’ ‘ Coy behind the fairy floss clouds’ such an air of innocence… of young, dreamy love. Many will relate to Maria Williams September 26, 2024 at 12:30 AM Dear sweet Soul, you summarised this so well, thanks so much my friend. So glad you liked it, and thank you for sharing your lovely gift of poetry with us as well. I greatly enjoy reading your poems, even though I might get caught up with work, I still always read. Keep writing always ...Hugs Christina Bowring September 25, 2024 at 11:56 PM this. I loved it, as always, from your wonderful, creative, so talented heart. Thank you for sharing your blessed gift with us. Hugs and blessings xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 25, 2024 at 10:32 PM This is a beautifully written, captivating tale of the heartbreak of a failed love affair. Heartfelt congratulations on POTD. Blessings. Maria Williams September 26, 2024 at 12:25 AM Dear Evelyn, so glad you liked it. I appreciate your visit and support always...Hugs

Brandy Nicole September 25, 2024 at 7:01 PM Dear Maria, the heart is trying to balance emotions within. There's love, longing and heartache. The music and video capture the moment perfectly. Your thoughts caress softly around me. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy Maria Williams September 26, 2024 at 12:23 AM Dear Brandy, yeah sadly life is not all candy coloured rainbows and fairy floss clouds, but us being the resilient beings that we are, we learn to move on. So glad you liked it my friend, I appreciate you...Hugs

Sotto Poet September 25, 2024 at 5:33 PM Wonderful poem captures the bittersweet nostalgia of young love, emphasizing the joy and pain associated with fleeting moments of intimacy and connection. It reflects on the beauty of cherished memories while grappling with the heartache of separation. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD. Maria Williams September 26, 2024 at 12:25 AM Thank you for your congratulations and comment Soto. They are so appreciated - your summation is always so correct always striking straight to the point. Maria

Andrea Dietrich September 25, 2024 at 12:43 PM Congrats also on the POTd Maria Williams September 26, 2024 at 12:18 AM Thanks so much Andrea xx

Andrea Dietrich September 25, 2024 at 12:42 PM wow, this is so awesome. I think the music that goes with it is so pretty. Who arranged the music and who sang it? I had three poems made into songs long ago, and I really hoped something great would happen from it but it never did. I think your song is worthy to be put out into the world. Very good work. Maria Williams September 26, 2024 at 12:17 AM Dear Andrea, yes I thought the music was truly beautiful and so was the singer used. Did you post the songs on YouTube? What about TikTok, seems a lot of people are getting recognised there. I was reading about these two young guys who posted a song of theirs that went viral started on a million views straight away. Lucky them. Can I reach you on Face Book? I could share some information there...Hugs

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