Love Hurts

I observed you when you loved me,

I observed you when you couldn't take the fact i didn't love you,

 
I remember the atrocious behavior

which you behaved when you came to know that i never loved you,

 

you cut your wrist with  the knife from the kitchen,

you tore the poetry that you had written,

set them ablaze,to show how wretched  you felt,

when you heard from me that i  didn't love you.

 

you tried all versions of eccentricities,

like ripping, starving, tearing, burning ,

but i felt you are trying to make me fear,

for in love all these shall make you,

feel for the one you loved,

but for me it was a a threatening stuff .

whats the use of hurting self ?

for a person who doesn't understand your love

or probably  you she doesn't love?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Pratap Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 9:25 PM
Lovely touching poem this 1 have some on the same topic do go through them nikki ~V~
A   Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 9:29 PM
A very touching poem N S., From sparkling hours of love to the stillness of love when one wants to put fear in it.” ---, to deep thoughtfulness, to the feelings of pain when it comes to love..... LINDA
Shines Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 8:08 AM
nice write and yes love should be from both people who want to have a relationship.
Swaminathan Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:52 AM
call me niki kenisha thanks
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