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Love Hurts

L lingering passion,never sated O often overlooked, sometimes over rated. V valued beyond,the holy grail E everlasting search, eternal fail. H humans are animals, passion and desire U unearthly greed,so full of fire. R remember the time,love was our goal T through passion and greed,it rips out our soul S so now we know, love hurts. 11/22/2020

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Date: 4/19/2021 1:42:00 PM
yeah tell me about it..pretty good little acrostic, congrats on your contest win.:)
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Date: 4/18/2021 7:22:00 PM
A well written acrostic and impressively rhymed! Congrats on your win Simon! Blessings, Kim M
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Simon Hamill
Date: 4/19/2021 11:51:00 AM
Hi Kim, thank you.i enjoyed writing acrostic, didn't know what it was until I joined soup.take care.simon
Date: 12/13/2020 2:48:00 PM
Love can be a destroyer but can also be everything to some. Emilia : )
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Date: 12/13/2020 4:24:00 PM
Yes I suppose it can.im just trying different types of poems.im just a builder,I can count bricks,not syllables.lol.take care. : )

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