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Love Free - Notes Added

Soft subtle brushes floating  in a sea
of anticipation  bubble across jagged
scars   running effortlessly     upon a
beaten chest      eye lashes flickering
flirting        every time a simple hum 
in satisfaction flows out   the corners
of a muted mouth   a tongue twisted
and tied from the beauty      glowing
gliding  effortlessly     washing away
pain hibernating in   a sedated heart
waiting for step sisters to step  aside
allow  shadowed dancers  to proceed
and locked up lovers        to live free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/4/2016 2:41:00 AM
Locked up lovers to live free - I can so much relate to that, sometimes I feel like a cinder girl.
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Date: 9/1/2016 10:31:00 AM
This is a uniquely creative write, Tim. I hope your Cinderella eventually found happiness. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/29/2016 10:20:00 AM
Superbly done my friend...a different take and point of view...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/28/2016 10:40:00 PM
Leave me breathless to the last words...I enjoyed the way it is composed and presented. Well done. :) Sunita
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Date: 8/28/2016 9:44:00 PM
This is amazing, what could have inspired such a write, I am curious! :)
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