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Love For a Movie Screen

It was a romance only seen in forgotten dreams. An Oscar winning script written for movie screens. Her ethereal sight was the ultimate pleasure. Her eyes an enigma full of enchanted treasure. Her voice sang like an orchestra of angelic harmonies. Softly serenading sensual spiritual symphonies. Captivated, we danced like butterflies - fragile and soft. Seduced by her aroma, all inhibitions were lost. Our hearts met like waves resting upon twilight's seashore. Then I said those words my tongue had not revealed before. As we lay there, silently gazing at stars above, I spoke a language declaring an immortal love. Instead of a smile, tears rolled down her tender face. Confessed her secret of being from another place. She would disappear at the first sight of day light. My heart bled a tear as we embraced tight for the night. At dawn the horizons painted a rare aurora. A final message from her celestial aura. Melancholic from a love story that ended too soon. Still to this day my heart yearns for her unique choral tune.
The Silent One 28 September 2017 Example for Love for movie screens contest
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:56 PM
Silver screen poetry, SO. Happy endings aren't always in the mix when it comes to love though. Exquisitely expressed poetry. Stellar write. Love and smiles.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:15 AM
Silent one, you always manage to write moving pictures through your lines... love it! thank you for the encouragement and inspiration.. hugs xx //Olive ELoisa
Goudreau Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 9:12 PM
Magnificent vision of purity and enchantment. True love that the heart bleeds a tear....very moving and so very sad ...this write would be perfect for a Walt Disney movie. Wishing she comes back...dancing like butterflies, fragile and soft. Beautifully written.
Welch Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 5:09 PM
'Softly serenading sensual spiritual symphonies...' amazing astonishing alliteration, and you worked it perfectly into the poem too.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 9:07 AM
A great example Silent. I did a search for your Twighlight poem but could not find it. When was it posted?
One Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Richard. It is the first one.
Wanter Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 6:45 PM
I didn't read it for a contest entry. I read your poems for their beauty!
Ashley Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 8:21 PM
Such an enthralling write Silent One. Captivating with romantic and mystical imagery. Your first line is stellar and the rest are superb throughout. I am always amazed with your poetry. Breathtaking and enjoyed!
Lindley Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 12:36 PM
A beautifully conceived and captivating tale my friend. Superb example for the, Love for movie screens contest!!
Ricci Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:20 AM
Hello Silent - This entry is solid and it very much mirrors an example of romance in movies. Well done and expressed. Best of luck with the contest.
Dutta Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 10:57 PM
Wonderful! It should be as penned by Truly Talented Poet. I admire. Best Wishes always
Duet Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 7:30 PM
What an interesting concept! Expanded upon, I bet this would make a great movie.
Dharmakari Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 9:23 AM
Very romantic! Silent One :)
Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 6:47 AM
Beautiful, Silent ... Captivating ...
Sathasivam Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 3:45 AM
Excellent. Love the romance and mystery. Thanks for sharing it.
Rustom Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 10:20 PM
A fascinating piece of poetry.
Ellison Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 11:42 AM
An absolute charmer, So! Ever thought of moving to Hollywood? STUNNING!!!
Cresswell Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 11:23 AM
Oh how I loved and hated those movies when I as young and primed for happy endings. You with your magic have returned my heart to that time. That feeling. thank you.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 10:44 AM
Nice! Satin flowing language
Onclaud Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 9:51 AM
resplendent in its poetic expression.. i have not seen the contest but will get into it, S O... your pen strikes again!..huggs
Roper Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 9:33 AM
Love the romance and mystery, Silent One. It will be hard to beat. Thank you hugs eve
Sands Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 9:09 AM
This is just beautiful and reaches the reader's heart deeply! Well written! :)
Y. Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 7:39 AM
Hi Silent, I really enjoyed this write. It's a great example for the contest. Was she an angel? I found this write to be romantic and mysterious. It was like watching a "movie" on the screen. Well done:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Oh, Silent, your romantic rhyme and photo a bittersweet serenade! So lovely! A fave!
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 7:23 AM
Heavenly love--you wrote this lovely script in so few lines--hard to match!!
Daniel Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 6:51 AM
So romantic and imaginative, Silent One:)
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