'love Flow'

drifting words, no recur as he murmurs secrets he never planned to share with you love flow 22/05/2011... 22:25

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Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 5/29/2011 5:31:00 AM

love flows in your heart for real,..for sure...with this poem! great! love it! ----junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/26/2011 9:05:00 PM

feel like am floating on a cloud of romance Wilma... intense poetry my friend..luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/23/2011 2:11:00 PM

A love that is a surprise is TRUE LOVE... well said Sweetheart.... Give a bit and I will return that soupmail

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2011 9:39:00 PM

A smooth write, Wilma. keep that flow going!!!

Kash Poet

Date: 5/22/2011 8:24:00 PM

Very nice Cinquin here Wilma.Your creativity is everflowing with these small verses....

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/22/2011 5:12:00 PM

thought provoking! one wants to know the secret? Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/22/2011 2:31:00 PM

ah yes the pure secret between souls so close and murmurs of drifting words..lovingly penned Wilma.. always enjoy your adventures into creativity my friend..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2011 1:48:00 PM

Love takes us beyond our normal boundaries, Wilma. Sometimes words of love are only expressed in the heat of passion. They seem more meaningful when said at other times. Love your poem! Love you as well, Carolyn

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 5/22/2011 1:30:00 PM

Very nice...but "murmur" should read "murmurs"...