Love Diaster

When I asked you did you love me,you said you didn't know.
I asked you again and you said it was all for show.
When I said that I loved you,you didn't really care
I guess that the love we had wasn't really there.
When you said that you'll always be there for me,it wasn't really true.
I guess I felt stupid enough to even fall for you.
when I told you that I hated you, you said you hated me too.
But when you broke my heart all I did was think of you.
Then you call two or three times a day expecting me to answer.
Then I finally do and you tell me you have cancer.
Your telling me that you love me and always will.
But I tell you if I love you back are you going to be foreal.
Then I had a dream that you silently passed away, and then I wake up with a voicemail the
following next day.
Now I'm at your funeral filled with tears.
I felt like I've known you for many years.
I wish I just had that one more day to tell you everything all that I should say.
Now I'm moving on and your still in my heart.
Now is a new day and I'm starting on a fresh start.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/13/2011 7:15:00 PM
Yes...a fresh start...the darkness in this poem is very graphic. Affairs of the heart can be so dramatic especially looking back Julie
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