Love Defiled By Hate

She was a Capulet and he a Montague
Yet the moment their eyes locked, such great passion grew
Scaled her balcony, professions of love to croon
Juliet warned, “Swear not by the inconstant moon”

Forced to elope because of a family feud
Hidden love’s revelation they had to elude
When Romeo’s friend Mercutio, Tybalt slew
Romeo killed Tybalt and from their town withdrew

Her father sought to wed Juliet to a Count
The friar gave her a potion, a small amount
Upon finding Juliet seemingly lifeless
Parents placed her in a tomb in funeral dress

The plan went awry and both lovers met their fate
Tragedy born when love did not overcome hate



June 9, 2011
Written for Brian's "Up to Thee Max 14 Lines" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 4:35 AM
Congratulations Carolyn for your win in the contest of Brian Strand "Up To Thee". Love, Carol P. S. I was away and missed congrats on many of Brian's contest. I try but don't know if I will ever catch up.
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 9:05 PM
what an interesting idea to do a sonnet on a Shakespeare story. What better story to emulate?? nice seeing you here today, and thanks for the nice comments, Carolyn.
Wesley Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 5:28 PM
Carolyn, You manage to get every emotion in this. The up and down is wonderful. Thanks you for your dear comments on mine. It is so encouraging to get feedback.,,,,,,,,Love, Elizabeth
Locksley Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 12:34 PM
I think this was the saddest love story ever written. Congratulations on your win.
Horne Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 1:00 PM
I love this beautiful sonnet on R & J, my friend.
Onclaud Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 12:31 PM
oops, sorry carols...:)
Onclaud Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 12:29 PM
a biggie win to you, charles.. too bad i missed this contest...:) hugggs
Falotico Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 10:48 AM
Very well written Carolyn.... Please don't worry about catchig up on Poems, just rest and get better....My prayers are always there for you...love Michael
Mehta Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 10:34 AM
So tghe tragedy when love is forlorn, hahahah, enjoyed it, CD
Devonshire Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 11:46 AM
Dr. Ram, I think Romeo and Juliet was one of Shakespeare's greatest tragedies. Not sure why you found the poem humorous, but that was not my intent.
Neels Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Hey there Carolyn, hope you are feeling better today.. I really enjoyed this write and the message, beautiful comes to mind.. Love you Wilma
Guzzi Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 9:36 AM
sorry you are not feeling well! And glad writing can be a comfort to you! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Maverick Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 12:34 PM
I am sure this must be a winner Carolyn, keep strong..
Foulk Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 11:47 AM
a beautiful piece of well written poetry, enjoyed it.
Gorelick Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 9:58 AM
Thinking of you LNC...beautiful poem..almost as beautiful as you are..feel better...BG
Gorelick Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 9:58 AM
Thinking of you LNC...beautiful poem..almost as beautiful as you are..feel better...BG
Roberts Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 9:33 AM
absolutely lovely, best of luck in Brian's contest , I hope you feel better soon Carolyn and that your health problems will quickly go away We can't go walking in Bowen park , or collecting driftwood at the Lagoon if you aren't well now can we
Babcock Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Carolyn I hope your health improves. I hope your trip was not to much for you. Did you catch the big one? ha ha Enjoyed this piece. love phyl
Zzzzz Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 6:55 AM
Excellent write, Carolyn. Wishing you luck in the contest, and I hope your health improves. Love and best wishes, Robert.
Long Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 5:48 AM
very good, good luck in the contest. cory
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