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Love Came Flying

Love came flying, one bright blue day. Soon we were walking hand in hand, you said softly my eyes were stars; you had kissed my lips with passion, and you held me tight in your arms. You said softly my eyes were stars, oh, I recall the day we wed; it was a wedding in the snow, you had kissed my lips with passion. Love came flying, you said softly my eyes were stars; now, I visit your engraved tomb, you had kissed my lips with passion. Love came flying. Love came flying, one bright blue day. ________________________________ February 6, 2019 Poetry/Unrhymed Ballad/Love Came Flying Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1112-451-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Repetitive sponsor Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer Fourth Place

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Date: 2/12/2019 9:52:00 PM
Beautiful Dear Heart, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 2/13/2019 9:34:00 AM
Eve, thanks for visiting with the beautiful, congrats and hugs ~
Date: 2/12/2019 4:17:00 PM
Beautiful and tender, lovely done. Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/13/2019 9:37:00 AM
Maureen, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and congratulations ~
Date: 2/12/2019 3:34:00 PM
Very nice experiment with an unrhymed form DH.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/13/2019 9:38:00 AM
Cecelia, thanks for the contest and inspiration and my placement, appreciate ~
Date: 2/6/2019 12:31:00 PM
Such tenderness in love so pure. Love the verse. Good luck in the contest . Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 2/13/2019 9:39:00 AM
Eve, thanks for visiting with the sweet comment ~

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