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Love Bird

A loving bird to perch so high. Up, up and ever so above the branches in a pine. A bird the love the nest does watch. Overseeing the air space with the birds eye for love. The love bird it sits waiting to fly. Missing not a glimpse of a little passer by. Treetops and canopy of the songs they sing. There may just be another love bird that sits. Staring off into the spacial distance. An air of area that flight for love birds takes place. Area that lifts them on the wind stream towards more open space. Open is air to fly and take flight. Directing each feather to flow just right. The love bird is ready to see more than the nest. Is love bird still waiting to fly with all the rest?

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Date: 11/6/2017 11:29:00 PM
I have numerous bird feeders because I enjoy watching birds but your descriptive rendition is totally amazing since it, in my opinion, so subtly refers to someone waiting and wanting to be loved solely for who they are. Great write
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Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/7/2017 6:19:00 PM
They are so easy to gain much inspiration from when they sing and take flight to their movement. I can relate to their amazing natural aerial shows and how much visually they can bring to poetry. Thank you for your insight as to what this refers too. You are correct. :-)

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