Love Bird

 There’s a dove of pure love; could I spot it?
For if love is a bug then I’ve got it
I looked up above
And saw that white dove
But it pooped on my head so I shot it

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Jack Horne

March 11, 2024 at 2:23 PM

Ha ha ha, love it - that bloody bird keeps pooping on my head too

Terry Flood

March 12, 2024 at 4:14 PM

I don’t know what clown said it was good luck, but I’d like a word with him ;-)

Linda Alice Fowler

March 11, 2024 at 7:51 AM

Dove are tasty little birds, but it takes +/- four to make a single meal, so shoot again! I'm still laughing... :)

Terry Flood

March 12, 2024 at 4:16 PM

Thanks, Linda. Popped into my head out of nowhere. Glad you enjoyed. Terry

David Fisher

March 10, 2024 at 1:34 PM

Very funny, and unexpected ending(though probably should have known, lol.)

Terry Flood

March 12, 2024 at 4:17 PM

Glad to give you a laugh, David. Terry

Beryl Edmonds

March 9, 2024 at 6:19 PM

The ending made me laugh Terry, love the Lim… Beryl

Terry Flood

March 12, 2024 at 4:18 PM

Then my work here is done ;-) thanks, Beryl. Terry

Deb M

March 9, 2024 at 3:25 PM

You are sooooooo funny……my funny friend….another clever last liner!! Debx

Terry Flood

March 9, 2024 at 4:46 PM

Thanks, Deb. I’m trying to finish a ‘Freezer Mice’ adventure that is now so stupidly long that I’d probably have to post it in four parts…. Yeah, like that’ll get a bunch of reads… ha ha! Anyway, thought I’d take a breather from that and jot something a little more… er… brief. Glad you enjoyed ;-)