Love Bird

There’s a dove of pure love; could I spot it? For if love is a bug then I’ve got it I looked up above And saw that white dove But it pooped on my head so I shot it

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Jack Horne

Date: 3/11/2024 2:23:00 PM

Ha ha ha, love it - that bloody bird keeps pooping on my head too

Terry Flood
Date: 3/12/2024 4:14:00 PM

I don’t know what clown said it was good luck, but I’d like a word with him ;-)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/11/2024 7:51:00 AM

Dove are tasty little birds, but it takes +/- four to make a single meal, so shoot again! I'm still laughing... :)

Terry Flood
Date: 3/12/2024 4:16:00 PM

Thanks, Linda. Popped into my head out of nowhere. Glad you enjoyed. Terry

David Fisher

Date: 3/10/2024 1:34:00 PM

Very funny, and unexpected ending(though probably should have known, lol.)

Terry Flood
Date: 3/12/2024 4:17:00 PM

Glad to give you a laugh, David. Terry

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/9/2024 6:19:00 PM

The ending made me laugh Terry, love the Lim… Beryl

Terry Flood
Date: 3/12/2024 4:18:00 PM

Then my work here is done ;-) thanks, Beryl. Terry

Deb M

Date: 3/9/2024 3:25:00 PM

You are sooooooo funny……my funny friend….another clever last liner!! Debx

Terry Flood
Date: 3/9/2024 4:46:00 PM

Thanks, Deb. I’m trying to finish a ‘Freezer Mice’ adventure that is now so stupidly long that I’d probably have to post it in four parts…. Yeah, like that’ll get a bunch of reads… ha ha! Anyway, thought I’d take a breather from that and jot something a little more… er… brief. Glad you enjoyed ;-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2024 1:29:00 PM

Haha. Good one, Terry

Terry Flood
Date: 3/9/2024 3:05:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.