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Love Battle

I rage, my need for you bleeding helpless tied, bound by these silken ropes of love my cries will never reach your side, my life over the music that deafens my heartbeats I stand mute and solo without you till we belong to each other even if that destroys who you are you will only belong to our love even if that kills us... There is a riot in my heart exploding me apart the burning blood of your beauty razing reason's rampart, defenses devised by decades of destructive love surround my soul with swords sharpened on evil known of, I need you to breech the war barrior, to rescue my red potential break the black bricks of the sorrow wall with a woman's wherewithal, we will pay Fate's ransom for union legend with unbroken breaths of lovers impassioned - A Collaboration From The Quills Of Bindu & Justin

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/14/2015 5:44:00 PM

You must battle all for the woman you love. Creative write by you and Bindu.

Justin Bordner
Date: 11/14/2015 10:40:00 PM

Battle more I will, for the heart in need of love surrenders not Eileen...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein

Date: 10/19/2015 7:12:00 PM

Ur writings are so emotional and romantic, it's true that's why u keep capturing people hearts....great one again my friend. :)

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/20/2015 7:41:00 PM

I am a captive of love dear Dalia...J.A.B.

Jay Loveless

Date: 3/21/2015 9:35:00 PM

Breathtaking. A masterpiece. One of my favorite. This piece wraps you up in the want and need, the desperation, driving you to that sword of love. Brilliant.

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/22/2015 12:07:00 AM

Yes, want, need, desperation brought together by natural attraction producing beauty stronger than steel Jay...J.A.B.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/21/2015 6:02:00 PM

Hi Justin! I have already commented about this excellent co-write on Bindu's post, but I'm also stopping by here to share due praise with you. Need yearns for liberation! #7 All the best, // paul

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/21/2015 11:58:00 PM

Liberating Need keeps it's purpose alive...I thank you for your kindness Paul. J.A.B.

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/18/2015 1:10:00 PM

Good job of relaying your feelings so others may see what makes love tick. Emile.

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/19/2015 8:04:00 PM

Love must live to save the heart, and once awoken it will exert fanatical combat on all obstacles to attain it's fullest expression, it's most noble creation Emile. J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/17/2015 8:37:00 PM

The entire first stanza screams and thrashes in a passionate whirl."I stand mute and solo without you"WOW! I absolutely love the entire composition. You two, once again, amazing work..as well as the first stanza I enjoyed the lines "I need you to breech the war barrior, to rescue my red potential break the black bricks of the sorrow wall with a woman's wherewithal"...you've surprised the "unbroken breaths" of my own, both of you.I love the intensity of both of your styles Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/17/2015 9:39:00 PM

This poem is an outcry for the need of companionship that every heart demands and explores Laura...Bindu and I reached deeply, and intensely to express this life fire. You are very sensitive to this yearning, and I thank you my Gothic Princess...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/17/2015 7:38:00 AM

I stand mute and solo without you till we belong to each other-A deep and silent pledge of yearning and love-Lovely Bindu,and We will pay faith's ransom for union legend-A determined passionate verse..showing love is a bigger word than faith itself.A love that goes beyond borders..Strong words Justin.A great collab ..indeed is-Charma

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/17/2015 1:56:00 PM

Yes Charma, faith is a heartbeat of Love, and Love is need that can confront any Fate. Bindu's intense intellect and raw spiritual beauty create a super natural union of soul expression between us. Thank you for appreciating our passionate Art my Lady Hawk...J.A.B.