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Love At First Sight Anacreontic Verse

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Abandoned by your own mother. How could she leave you to die? You were helpless, bedraggled and weak. When I saw you my heart melted… who could resist those huge blue eyes. I scooped you up and carried you home. You cried for your mum; but she was long gone. I gave you warm milk you drank thirstily; then fell asleep in my arms. I begged my mum to let you stay. From that day you stole my heart. I fell in love with my first kitten. Sponsor Ed Ebbs Contest Anacreontic Verse 1 11~07~15

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/1/2016 12:56:00 AM

I had a few tissues to spare so came back for a second read!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2016 6:44:00 AM

I get a lump in my throat every time I see that picture:-( Thanks for all your support and friendship I do appreciate everything you do :-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 11/21/2015 4:10:00 AM

Cute, sweet and lovely....referring to both the poem and the visual!! Congratulations on a very deserved win, Jan:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2015 4:18:00 AM

Thanks Paul:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/20/2015 8:57:00 PM

This is such a sweet write! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2015 3:07:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2015 2:59:00 PM

Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2015 3:02:00 PM

Thanks Sara it was my first attempt was really delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/20/2015 2:57:00 AM

You did a great Job here Jan,congrats on the win...hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2015 3:19:00 AM

I was delighted to place so well - Ed doesn't normally have so many winners:-) hugs jan x

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/19/2015 7:50:00 PM

Congratulation Jan for a well deserved win Anisha D

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2015 3:19:00 AM

Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/19/2015 9:09:00 AM

Hi Jan: A very warm welcome to a lost kitten. congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2015 11:39:00 AM

Thanks Ralph:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman

Date: 11/19/2015 7:39:00 AM

Back to say again, tender sweet write , Jan. (I'm happy to see it was a short break.)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2015 11:39:00 AM

I am a lot happier here James and my muse is starting to come back:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/19/2015 6:36:00 AM

How shweet Jan! A 7!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2015 11:38:00 AM

Thanks Balveen:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/19/2015 4:41:00 AM

Wow how sweet Jan.. congrats on superb win with this cute write!!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2015 4:44:00 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/19/2015 4:17:00 AM

Jan, very very vulnerable and so sweet!!! congrats!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2015 4:38:00 AM

Thanks Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/19/2015 2:17:00 AM

ahh, nothing like being in love, jan... ohh so fine.. super congrats!..huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2015 2:17:00 AM

Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 11/18/2015 11:26:00 PM

This is one of my favorites Jan. It should be any animals lover favorite. It was heartfelt to know so many little ones are abandoned. Congratulations on your well deserved win!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2015 2:18:00 AM

Pure fiction write for me Michael - thanks for your lovely comment you have made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 11/18/2015 10:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2015 2:18:00 AM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 11/18/2015 9:13:00 PM

very well done, JAN

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2015 2:18:00 AM

Thanks Lin:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 11/18/2015 8:07:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2015 2:17:00 AM

Thanks Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/18/2015 7:25:00 PM

Congratulations Jan.

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/18/2015 6:15:00 PM

I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2015 6:21:00 PM

Oh wow thanks Ed I am delighted to place so well:-) hugs jan xxx

Lu Loo

Date: 11/18/2015 11:58:00 AM

Oh my, how beautiful Jan..You have a remarkable talent lady... *smiles*! -LU xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2015 6:02:00 PM

You are too kind Laura ...I am a fledgling that is now spreading her poetic wings:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/9/2015 10:48:00 AM

My God, what a beautiful poem, you just melted my heart! A7

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2015 11:54:00 AM

Awwthank you my friend - purely a fiction write for me as I have an allergy to their fur:-( Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 11/8/2015 6:34:00 AM

Beautiful Jan. This shows your big heart.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2015 3:53:00 PM

Oh do they I must find one to see how I get on:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 11/8/2015 7:47:00 AM

The Siberian cats have fur.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2015 7:36:00 AM

I think they are vile Tim lol - they looked like skinned rabbits - ugh the whole point of the cat is having the fur to stroke and calm you -:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 11/8/2015 6:59:00 AM

There are hypoallergenic cats like a Siberian that you can have.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2015 6:53:00 AM

How I wish it was true but its a fictional write Tim - I would LOVE to have a cat but I have an allergy to their fur:-( hugs jan xx

Scott Williams

Date: 11/7/2015 11:29:00 PM

Jan, that very thing happened to me when I was a little boy. Well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2015 4:01:00 AM

Aww that's a lovely happy memory for you Scott ...mine is pure fiction for the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Gary Watkins

Date: 11/7/2015 8:47:00 PM

A lovely tale and you did it within the strictures of anacreontic verse! You have a deft hand, Jan, and a beautiful spirit.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2015 4:00:00 AM

Thanks Gary it is my first attempt at this form - purely a fiction write on my part:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2015 8:06:00 PM

this is so sweet, Jan. I really like it.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2015 3:59:00 AM

Thanks Andrea I don't know if it fits the 'love' criteria but it is all my muse could come up with:-( hugs jan xx

James Inman

Date: 11/7/2015 5:46:00 PM

So tender Jan. Beautiful write.

James Inman
Date: 11/7/2015 7:55:00 PM

Sorry to hear that Jan, but we all need a break at times. I hope things are OK.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/7/2015 5:48:00 PM

Thanks James my muse and enthusiasm for writing have deserted me at the moment so I have let poetry take a back seat - may take a break if i don't pick up:-( hugs jan xx