Victor Buhagiar Poet Pantoum

Love at First Sight - A Pantoum

How lovely it was to romp on the grass,
How easy it was to make friends with her.
I saw her in a car a comely lass,
But their red car sped on in quite a blur.

How easy it was to make friends with her.
I barked at my master to make him speed. 
But their red car sped on in quite a blur.
We both caught up to park, and we were freed.

I barked at my master to make him speed. 
I saw her in a car a comely lass,
We both caught up to park, and we were freed.
How lovely it was to romp on the grass.

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Michael Tor March 7, 2025 at 5:12 PM Victor you are a master of the Pantoum form my friend. Lovely poem I so enjoyed reading...

Ink Empress March 7, 2025 at 10:01 AM I find pantoums not easy to flow but yours flow so seamlessly dear victor! I love the storytelling too here in a way and how engaging your poem is! Always a pleasure reading your poems. Sending you light always

Joanna Daniel March 6, 2025 at 12:55 AM I remember reading this poem before, is it a repost? Puppy love, great point of view:) Victor Buhagiar March 6, 2025 at 1:11 AM No, it is not a repost and my original. I rarely write on dogs...or cats.

Mike Gentile March 5, 2025 at 4:19 AM Victor, I was so delighted when I realized the lovely lass was a pup! I just smiled all the way through. What a great idea. Happy Wednesday !!

Joseph P. DiMino March 4, 2025 at 6:33 PM Love and joy from the dog's perspective. Well done! Very enjoyable read.

Jerry Brotherton March 4, 2025 at 10:30 AM Victor, your happy ending makes me smile. An excellent Pantoum, my friend.

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 4, 2025 at 5:41 AM Dear Victor, this was such a delightful read! The pantoum structure gives it a rhythmic charm, and the playful perspective adds so much warmth. You captured the joy of connection so beautifully and innocent, spontaneous, and full of life. I loved every moment of it! Spring Blesssings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Maria Williams March 4, 2025 at 1:37 AM So adorable. I love watching dogs play in the park near us, their infectious joy passes on to everyone around. Gods gift to man. You have penned a great poem dear Victor...Hugs

Hilda Greenhough March 3, 2025 at 10:46 PM I like this charming pantomime. I especially enjoy that this time you got the girl. Congratulations.

Bj Legros Kelley March 3, 2025 at 10:32 PM How simply adorable Victor! I love it :) <3

Sally Eslinger March 3, 2025 at 10:05 PM Ahh, Victor, king of the pantoum! Another super one! Love how it ends! You should jead an online class in this form! A lovely image. A Fave for me! Have a wonderful day. I’m ready to sleep…you’re probably having breakfast…

Valsa George March 3, 2025 at 8:27 PM Excellent pantoum! Victor, your love poems are always so passionate and vibrant with emotions.

Eve Roper March 3, 2025 at 8:53 AM Great pantonum, I have not written one i

Kim Rodrigues March 3, 2025 at 5:42 AM So cute!

Arthur Vaso March 3, 2025 at 1:40 AM beautiful Victor, love how you did this.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh March 2, 2025 at 10:01 PM A charming real life experience described so nicely.Like the poem.

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 2, 2025 at 8:24 PM Victor, I really love this tale of a delightful play date. So cute! :)

Tom Cunningham March 2, 2025 at 3:56 AM Quite a romantic verse Victor, don't find that form easy. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen March 2, 2025 at 2:30 AM - Lovely poem, Victor ... I can see them playing on the grass :) - hugs