Edward Ibeh Poet Lay

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Love At First Sight

A heart captured with just one look
     His eyes met hers, 'twas all it took! 
 Romantic spark bursts mammoth flame
     Attraction grows too wild to tame, 
          Wonderfully out of control
         Everlasting love is their goal
      Now stuck to each other like glue
      His search for nirvana is through.



Form L - Lay - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
Theme picked: Romance
Date written: 04/02/2022

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Constance La France April 8, 2022 at 1:36 PM Edward, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance Edward Ibeh April 8, 2022 at 2:12 PM Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.

Sara Kendrick April 7, 2022 at 3:17 PM Congrats on this romantic winning work that is on Constance's winners' list. Way to go. Very composed lines. Sara Edward Ibeh April 8, 2022 at 2:11 PM Thank you very much, Sara:-)

Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2022 at 9:42 AM Congratulations! Edward Ibeh April 5, 2022 at 12:31 PM Thank you so much, Kim:-)

Christuraj Alex April 4, 2022 at 6:47 AM "Attraction grows too wild to tame" - Beautiful. Congratulations! Edward Ibeh April 4, 2022 at 1:12 PM Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)

Kim Rodrigues April 2, 2022 at 9:52 AM So great, Edward! I can feel it down deep! Edward Ibeh April 2, 2022 at 10:06 AM Thank you so much, Kim:-)

Vijay Pandit April 2, 2022 at 8:32 AM So nice to encounter love at first sight and even more so--to make it eternal. Well done-- in this not easy to execute form. Edward Ibeh April 2, 2022 at 9:28 AM As always, thanks for the visit and comment, Vijay:-)