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Love At First Sight --Cookie Jar

Cookie Jar If you were close and not so far away I would bring you a cookie from my Cookie Jar Hoping you would take a bite, Love at first sight! ( a dedication to ladies)

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April Mitchell

Date: 8/7/2013 7:32:00 PM

Beautiful even though short!lovely very very lovely indeed!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2013 2:16:00 PM

ha..love the dedication... and it happens to be I'm a cookie lover.. now give me my cookie... :-)...JK.... (soupmail)..*always~ :-) Linda

Reggae Magnet
Date: 1/28/2013 5:31:00 PM

PD, Your wish is my command, lovely lady.xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2013 4:44:00 PM

love your reply to my comment I left below.

Reggae Magnet
Date: 1/28/2013 5:05:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, what wouldn't I do to make you enjoy your cookies, must please the lady.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/26/2013 6:01:00 AM

It's been a long time since I have heard [cookie] used in this way. It made me smile. Light & Love

Reggae Magnet
Date: 1/26/2013 9:37:00 AM

Well Debbie there are some rhymes which sticks in the head from school days ,even infancy and this was one which was played out in a game of Tic. Don't know if you played it our way, but I rememeber we used to say, Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar? yes me, no you and then we would call out a number and that person would be chased until caught. Something like that(memory is fading!).