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Love At First Night

LOVE AT FIRST NIGHT I lay there quivering her arms around me legs enfolding mine foggy damp memories of last night's passion when acquaintance became something heatedly more. The nocturnal passion of last night's bliss vanished in morning rays warmgentle rays, repeated as if they had never gone as if melting, subdued flavors might erupt again (in our mind). I should have thought and so should have she of her dayslater words mountain muted, veiled her mumbled dayslater regrets "I don't really love you Nor I ever will". Rose 107 Fritz Crytzer November 2016

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Date: 1/10/2017 8:28:00 AM
This is my first poem since my wife divorced me, and I moved to Georgia. Somehow the "inspiration" does not seem to be there! I have joined a new writing group, and hopefully I will again be energized! Fritz Crytzer
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