Love and You - Rumi

and when I heard those stories of love,
my mind turns on you for a happy thoughts  
the distance narrows in
and the silence says more

no barrier may hinder
this emotion I have for you
race, distance nor even society
will not stop me however cynical they may be

listen to my heart 
the way it pounds when I hear your name
and look in my eyes 
the way I show you my soul

all those years I flirted with love
here and there I turn on searching
till you came along and show me those lies
you were with me all along unaware of who you are
LOVE since I was born until I met you it's YOU! 

- 5.9.2015

BASED ON VISUAL NUMBER 2

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/23/2016 11:53:00 AM
Michael, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/1/2015 11:33:00 AM
This is good, Michael. I positively remember leaving a comment here the last time. I don't know why it's not there... Kim
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Date: 5/8/2015 3:27:00 PM
lovely love poem - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Michael Hilario
Date: 5/10/2015 9:03:00 PM
Thank you Jan Allison for reading, Insane Reign and In the Mood is both awesome - Limerick is really pretty cool. Thanks and have a good day.
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