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Love and Smiles

In wild joy nothing matters but the feeling of seeing sunlight crafting colours in eyes that, they say, don't see too good, sun coloured fairies dance a beautiful dance, joined by softly sung hymns from sirens floating just above sea level, their long hair trailing just below the water. Awed my feet dance but only in my head, a dance of seawead, pearls and jelly-fish, in their white trailing bridal gowns. Your hands strike chords inside my gentleness, touching my spine with expert hands, Rachmaninoff on my vertebrae. A beach of sunlight, dancing fish, and you. I turn around and find my fingers explore your lips, a composition of love and smiles. *** Februari 6, 2017 © Darren White
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Pett Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 9:39 AM
This well written poem Certainly generates love and smiles Darren, really enjoyed, Roy.
White Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 9:41 AM
Thank you so much Roy, it was just time for some smiles :)
Vaso Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:23 PM
This is such a beautiful poem Darren!
White Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:28 PM
Thanks Art, I knda love it too!
Ella Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 7:07 PM
A beach of sunlight, dancing fish, and you. A beautiful poem and full of love and smiles <3 :) Thank you for sharing!
White Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:27 PM
yeap, nice and sunny, and perfect, just what we need <3
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 4:05 PM
Wonderful imagery, Darren. I love when you write this way! Very poetic.
White Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:21 PM
Thanks Andrea, I like it too :)
Ricci Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 2:03 PM
Hello Darren. This is poetically flawless.
White Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 2:04 PM
Lisa, thank you, I loved writing this.
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March 6, 2017 at 1:52 PM
- Lovely and sweet, Darren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
White Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 9:38 AM
This is beautiful...I'm trying to smile on this rainy day.
White Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 9:44 AM
Thanks Tim :) I needed a smile too after the series, an on this rainy day.
May Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 8:47 AM
An enchanting write of dance and love..best wishes..
White Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Thank you, Joseph :)
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