Love and Death

I love all of you
I embrace the beauty of the universe
I live in darkness
I smile as I cry
I'll make you laugh, as part of me dissolves
Now I leave you
As I must die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 8:02 AM
The outside smile is the armor that protects the inside grief and torment . That which one does not want exposed to others. I once spent decades doing that type of protection. One can reason, its my fight alone and I do not want to burden others with it . Yet burdening outside people(getting help) often is the key to victory. Fantastic write my friend!!!
Vaso Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 11:15 AM
You are a very wise man Robert! Thank-you as always!
Hamilton Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 1:41 PM
what lovely sentiments until the last two lines then reality lol Freddie ty for visiting my page hugs
Vaso Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 10:00 PM
Thank you Shadow for dropping by
Devonshire Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Dear Arthur, I admire the irony in this poem. You "smile" while crying and make her laugh even as part of you "dissolves." Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn
Vaso Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 9:59 PM
Thank you so much Carolyn!
Manassian Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 12:54 AM
Oh....Arthur, this is beautiful, but...oh so sad. :( I wonder what inspired you to write this piece. I'm glad you did, though.
Vaso Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 9:18 PM
A bottle of red wine!!! Thanks!!!
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