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Love and Betrayal

If you have ever been betrayed, then you know just how it feels. If it was from your friends or loved one's,you know the pain is real. I have been betrayed before, and probably will again, If you believe there is a GOD, you will know that it's a sin. To betray is to be unfaithful and something you can't take back, so stop and think a minute before you react. If you want to tell a secret, think of who you might betray, you know that it's not right and will catch up to you someday. COLLEEN MARIE BONO FOR OLUSEGUN ADELANA'S CONTEST THIS ONE IS A NEW POEM 1-26-10

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Date: 8/12/2010 7:59:00 AM
not that i haven't betryed anybody but i try to keep my spirit and soul called faithful and true
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Date: 3/16/2010 10:01:00 AM
Want to know a secret Colleen? No one will I betray. I just want to share how much I'm enjoying your poetry today. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 3/16/2010 12:57:00 AM
hey girl i love reading your poetry so far... i understand that you are going through some hard times... i can relate. i look forward to reading more but thats my time for tonight... i just wanted to say thank you and that everything will be alright <3
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Date: 2/25/2010 7:26:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem . I also have experiance the worst kind of betrayl..With ugly concequences...
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Date: 2/2/2010 3:06:00 PM
Good one about telling secrets. And people gotta be careful not to tell people THEIR secrets to the wrong people!! Hey, I need to get off here. LEt me know which poem you entered in anything goes, part 2, so I may read it. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/1/2010 10:54:00 PM
This is a really good approach to the challenge, Colleen ^_^, makes the reader think of the consequences of betrayal, and to always think before we act--wish you all the best in the contest :)
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Date: 1/30/2010 7:32:00 PM
I was just thinking about u Colleen and wondering how u are doing too... so happy to be back posting again... luv all your recent work... u have excited us all with your writings... thankxxx for being a wonderful friend to me during my crisis and hope u read my return blog too.. your support and uplifting comments have made me want to continue on this site... and so many other poets have given me warm welcomes back to the fold... u will never know how much u did for me.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/30/2010 8:31:00 AM
Neat poem Colleen, Glad to see that you are entering some of the contest. Great job on this one. Congratulations, it is already a winner in my estimation. I have been betrayed many times in my life, but not nessarly in the romantic department. But in the mutual friend area. But there is always forgiveness from heart depth, considering that betrayal, of a friend is always at the shallow mind level. For holding grudges is not possible at the sacred heart level, for love is it's Master. Love, Moses
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Date: 1/29/2010 9:57:00 PM
Your talent is shining through. Keep up the great writings.
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Date: 1/28/2010 6:22:00 AM
Beautiful writing,painful and cuts deep..Betrayal is hard indeed..Charma
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Date: 1/28/2010 3:52:00 AM
interesting
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Date: 1/27/2010 2:47:00 PM
Very nice Colleen...would the form be a quatern? Not sure.
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Date: 1/26/2010 4:43:00 PM
Dear Colleen, Excellent Entry for the Contest Good Luck I see a big change in YOUR POEMS as of late Great Job Keep at it A word of advice : You should Comment on the POEMS YOU Send YOUR "New POEM POSTED" ensignia even if it's just "Nice POEM" Something to think about My Heart is with YOU GOD Bless ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 1/26/2010 2:55:00 PM
And by the way good luck in the contest! Although it's already a winner within itself! :)
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Date: 1/26/2010 2:52:00 PM
Excellent Colleen! A wonderful advisory poem on the subject . Once again very well written and clear. Thanks for sharing it._Robert
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Date: 1/26/2010 2:46:00 PM
Excellent write Colleen. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2010 2:12:00 PM
Great entry and good luck in this contest Colleen... your efforts are showing in a wonderful way... very proud of u my dear friend... my entry is Lover's Lance.. u may have already read.. its a simple poem... am involved in a three way collaboration poem at the moment so its been a trip for me to enter contests, play catch up on my comments, and write new poetry all at the same time... thankxxx for sharing this beauty so real.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/26/2010 2:10:00 PM
Much truth to what you write. Hope you do well in the contest. Thanks for the heads up, Lightwalker
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Date: 1/26/2010 2:03:00 PM
Colleen, this poem conveys a message through your wonderful words, a joy to read and thank you so much for sharing and letting me know it was here >> James
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Date: 1/26/2010 1:46:00 PM
So much truth to your words. The emotion comes through the lines. Nice use of rhyme. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/26/2010 1:22:00 PM
Very true and wise words are contained in this poem, Colleen. It's a great write for the betrayal contest. I am glad that you are entering. You go!!! Love, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/26/2010 12:46:00 PM
Great poem! Colleen! Good advice. Indeed we should think twice before telling a secret or say or do something behind someone's back. But what comes around, also goes around. Good luck on the contest and thank you for sharing. Your poet friend, Caroline.
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Date: 1/26/2010 12:42:00 PM
Excellent, Colleen! good luck for comp! love, your freind Simone
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Date: 1/26/2010 12:34:00 PM
good luck in the contest, sweetie! LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/26/2010 12:33:00 PM
Well done, Colleen. Best wishes for success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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