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Love Along the Lake

Love Along the Lake Along the lake, Gentle water lapping Twinkling white caps splashing, Duck wings flapping; In a brilliant sunset strolling, Arm in arm a workaday away; The trill of laughter low and sweet, I love you, so easily, you did say. And I, I fell As hard as the path stones and Gave you my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/23/2017 8:29:00 AM
Hum... What a beautiful love and poetical ballade!!!!! I am dreaming now, dear!! Rita. ^^
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Date: 3/10/2017 4:35:00 AM
A gorgeous poem :-) Water is such a beautiful conduit for words of love and your poem is a wonderful reflection of your heart, nature and talent :-) many blessings to you lynn
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/10/2017 6:17:00 PM
I appreciate your support more than you know.
Date: 3/6/2017 10:25:00 PM
Beautiful Sunlite!! :) big hugs deb
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/10/2017 6:18:00 PM
Deborah, Thank you!!! And hugs to you, too.
Date: 3/5/2017 8:10:00 PM
This is beautiful. The imagery at the beginning made me feel all tingly inside ;)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/6/2017 11:45:00 AM
So nice of you to peek in and post such a nice comment.
Date: 3/5/2017 6:10:00 PM
A lovely walk, indeed!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/6/2017 11:44:00 AM
Oh, thank you!

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