Love Along the Lake

Love Along the Lake

Along the lake,
Gentle water lapping
Twinkling white caps splashing,
Duck wings flapping;
In a brilliant sunset strolling,
Arm in arm a workaday away;
The trill of laughter low and sweet,
I love you, so easily, you did say.
And I, I fell 
As hard as the path stones and
Gave you my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Solis Radius Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Hum... What a beautiful love and poetical ballade!!!!! I am dreaming now, dear!! Rita. ^^
Marie Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 4:35 AM
A gorgeous poem :-) Water is such a beautiful conduit for words of love and your poem is a wonderful reflection of your heart, nature and talent :-) many blessings to you lynn
Wanter Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 6:17 PM
I appreciate your support more than you know.
Burch Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 10:25 PM
Beautiful Sunlite!! :) big hugs deb
Wanter Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 6:18 PM
Deborah, Thank you!!! And hugs to you, too.
Dusome Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 8:10 PM
This is beautiful. The imagery at the beginning made me feel all tingly inside ;)
Wanter Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:45 AM
So nice of you to peek in and post such a nice comment.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 6:10 PM
A lovely walk, indeed!
Wanter Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:44 AM
Oh, thank you!
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