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Love Actually?

Back under the stars, back to when time was ours. Back to the great time I remember, back to making snow angels in December. I remember all of our life-defining time, I loved them so much, I had to make them rhyme. Both of our past wounds healed and with our first meeting, our futures were sealed. Maybe this is the greatest love ever, and during the hard times, I'll give up on you never. Everything seems to go away when I am with you, and remember, if you're a bird, I'm a bird too. When we are together, you ask me to be me, you are the only person who looked deep inside to see. In this world there is no one else I will put above, In this world, I wish it was me you love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/13/2010 10:59:00 PM
I feel for you because I felt this piece like I wrote it myself... The picture is clear and amazingly painted with words... The raw emotion makes it that much better. Fantastic poem
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Date: 11/9/2010 10:27:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your well written poetry today Chris. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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