Love Across Miles

he, a poor artist
sketched portraits for a living 
prophecy of love
Swedish girl appears
mesmerized him with blue eyes
why does heart beat fast? 
"draw my face", she says
will he capture my feelings? 
trembling paintbrush speaks
"we're destined to meet
you're my foreign fantasy, 
will you marry me?"
shy smile answers him
unfazed by this proposal
lovers tie the knot
she has to go back
he promises to join her
can she trust his word? 
year and a half gone
true love kept them together
in touch through letters 
he saved some money
how long could he stay away? 
cycled to Sweden
six thousand miles crossed
from India to his wife
a journey of love... 
...passion knows no boundaries...
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Mcintosh Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 6:31 AM
Beautiful story - beautiful love, love is like that, a hope, a prayer, a moment - turned to memory, so beautiful, so rare. Love it. God bless you always and I hope you win. Love, Gina
George Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 6:56 PM
Great story ! For love, one is prepared to undertake any amount of sacrifice. Great Choka . All the best dear Joanna !
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 4:16 AM
- A beautiful and romantic poem, Jo :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 2:27 AM
Ahh!! What a nice love story. Wonderful that they have been joined for a lifetime of love. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 12:32 PM
wow, talk about success with love at first sight!!! So fascinating.
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